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hunger gnaws haplessly harvestless, stark, earthen womb sparse amniotic fluid vacant calcified corpses emphysemic ether blooms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/29/2009 3:17:00 AM
I could not agree with this one more, I know the meaning well. love, Kristin
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Date: 1/28/2009 11:52:00 PM
Like the alliteration here Debbie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comment on my blog.I agree with your watchword especially for haiku and the like.
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Date: 1/28/2009 1:43:00 PM
Neat TANKA. I have no idea what you mean by 'capitalization...' and the meter was deliberate; it's the FLOW that I was after. Best wishes, Keith
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