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Dark Dawn

Dawn hopeful, expectant tantalizing, exhilarating, inviting friends, citizens, government, politicians inciting, embezzling, dictating greedy, covetous Darkness

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Samson Rotich

Date: 3/17/2021 2:03:00 AM

Oh Vicky, so artistic yet truthful...this is one of the greatest one word expressive poem I have ever read...I love symbolism and word expression...Good work Samson

John Michaels

Date: 4/8/2017 6:53:00 AM

Nice piece. Am impressed. Regards, John.

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 6:28:00 PM

Hi Vicky, have not seen you here in forever. :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 10:47:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/24/2014 1:24:00 PM

You have set up a real nice diamante poem, perfectly balanced, well done :)

Sizo Hlophe

Date: 9/30/2014 2:47:00 PM

Amazing piece Vicky :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/6/2014 7:49:00 AM

You express the complicated within the simplicity of this piece.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/16/2013 2:49:00 PM

Vicky, lovely transition from day to night, congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2013 1:28:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/15/2013 3:26:00 AM

a societal rant so well expressed, vicky.. sweet winning cheers to you!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2013 11:41:00 PM

wow you turned it political. Very creative. Congrats for your win.

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/14/2013 9:37:00 AM

Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/13/2013 10:11:00 PM

Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, Vicky

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/24/2013 9:37:00 AM

How few words do magic, you know well to get done. Really a dark dawn is seen in this present world. Beautifully done. Loved always, bl

Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/19/2013 3:39:00 AM

very , very nice Vicky,, I should try writing like this one day ;} thank you for reading my haiku " Floodgates" ;}

Kathryn Collins

Date: 11/10/2012 8:29:00 AM

Hi Vicky - Your poetry is tantalizing. It makes me wonder about you, your experiences, the well of your sense of injustice. You have a powerful talented voice through your poetry. love, Kathy

April Walter Skyy

Date: 11/8/2012 7:30:00 AM

you spelt it all out.Great poem. Thank you for taking the time out to read my poem I hope you will stop past again. MUCH LOVE!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/1/2012 8:47:00 PM

Excellent verse! Love how it started out, and then how it ended in complete darkness. The dawn of darkness has cometh! hehe. Anyway, great one. Always, Laura

Holly Moore

Date: 10/29/2012 12:16:00 PM

Wow..this is so cool! I've never heard of this form before. It really draws you in. You can picture it in you mind...Thanks for your comment. I wrote a Chokra (?) ..check it out! Thanks, Holly

Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 10/29/2012 12:34:00 PM

Will do.

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/27/2012 4:42:00 AM

Clever and nice write.

Canny Amah

Date: 10/26/2012 4:58:00 AM

so ... conscious of the darkness enveloping the entire earth with its man-led governance ... too grinding a greediness that men find inability to confront ... sadly everywhere you too ... cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! canny

Canny Amah
Date: 10/26/2012 4:59:00 AM

so conscious of the darkness enveloping the entire earth with its man-led governance ... too grinding a greediness that men find inability to confront ... sadly everywhere you turn ... cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! canny

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 10/24/2012 1:33:00 AM

Short and sharp. Good piece.

Imrana Iqbal

Date: 10/23/2012 2:52:00 AM

Great job Vicky! I totally agree with the images you have created here. Awesome!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2012 1:51:00 PM

Great job that you have done with this topic and the form..Enjoyed reading your work that has much truth in its lines..Sara

David Scott

Date: 10/19/2012 4:05:00 PM

ik AGREE WHO HAS THE RIGHT TO RULE wHAT I MENTIONED IN WORLD IN MY EYES THANKYOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON MY MISHAPS POEM POEM WAS ALREADY ON HERE JUST CGHANGED TITLE AND COUPLE OF LINES X DAVIDSCOTT