Dark Dawn

Oh Vicky, so artistic yet truthful...this is one of the greatest one word expressive poem I have ever read...I love symbolism and word expression...Good work Samson

Nice piece. Am impressed. Regards, John.

Hi Vicky, have not seen you here in forever. :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

You have set up a real nice diamante poem, perfectly balanced, well done :)

Amazing piece Vicky :)

You express the complicated within the simplicity of this piece.

Vicky, lovely transition from day to night, congratulations on your win.

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

a societal rant so well expressed, vicky.. sweet winning cheers to you!..:) huggs

wow you turned it political. Very creative. Congrats for your win.

Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, Vicky

How few words do magic, you know well to get done. Really a dark dawn is seen in this present world. Beautifully done. Loved always, bl

very , very nice Vicky,, I should try writing like this one day ;} thank you for reading my haiku " Floodgates" ;}

Hi Vicky - Your poetry is tantalizing. It makes me wonder about you, your experiences, the well of your sense of injustice. You have a powerful talented voice through your poetry. love, Kathy

you spelt it all out.Great poem. Thank you for taking the time out to read my poem I hope you will stop past again. MUCH LOVE!

Excellent verse! Love how it started out, and then how it ended in complete darkness. The dawn of darkness has cometh! hehe. Anyway, great one. Always, Laura

Wow..this is so cool! I've never heard of this form before. It really draws you in. You can picture it in you mind...Thanks for your comment. I wrote a Chokra (?) ..check it out! Thanks, Holly

Clever and nice write.

so ... conscious of the darkness enveloping the entire earth with its man-led governance ... too grinding a greediness that men find inability to confront ... sadly everywhere you too ... cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! canny

Short and sharp. Good piece.

Great job Vicky! I totally agree with the images you have created here. Awesome!

Great job that you have done with this topic and the form..Enjoyed reading your work that has much truth in its lines..Sara

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