Dark Circles

This trip is no lark
Treading water in the dark
Circled by the shark

By Robb A. Kopp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 12, 2010 at 3:46 PM
Accept ones circumstances and appreciate, we are not where we should be. Many a sailor during WWII had to endure Bull, Tiger and Reef sharks. Especially in the Pacific Theatre, but it does leave an aura of nightmarish proportions for us humans. And the title is very apt >> James
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March 11, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Now talk about a nightmare! Can't meditate on that for long!-Robert
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