Dark Black Night

Once upon a midnight, ghostly,
Partied many, dead ones mostly.
Feasting in the graveyard, sprightly,
White eyed werewolves gorged, engrossedly.

In the bone yard, drab and squalid,
Apparitions (staring stolid
Neath the veiled moon, clouded lightly)
Sought fresh bodies, lean but solid.

Fiendish eyes shone, light and sparkly,	
Ghouls and demons danced so darkly.
Maggots munching mush unsightly,
Black blood streamed like ink, quite starkly.

Fetid flesh oozed, flowing freely
Through the crypt doors, cold and steely.
Shadows, ashen, pranced contritely,
Ebon serpents slithered eely.

As it happens, all too often,
Zombies dimly closed the coffin –
Ra, the sun god, rising slightly
Hunger pangs were soon to soften.

If you ask, I’ll tell you blankly,
When you’re feeling dark and dankly
Come to where this happens nightly.
They’ll enjoy the feast, quite frankly...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Newman Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 4:54 PM
Hello terri. I really loved your poem. It's very inspirational and spiritual. Nice creativity. keep up the good work.
Wade Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 3:34 PM
a ghoulish invite easily declined, though frightfully delightful. :)
Negron Flores Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Terry.
A. Sharma Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 4:01 AM
Loved this absolutely amazing write Terry.. congrats on great win!
Hlabisa Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 3:04 AM
Congrats on the win... I really love your poem
Kimathi Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 1:21 AM
I could hear the creepy horror-movie background sounds, as I read through your poem.... :-0 It has a well-framed imagery, to last in the mind. Congrats for your #2 placement in the Poe contest, Terry! ;-)
A  Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 11:33 PM
Hi Terry, Congratulations on your Poe, Poe WIN! SKAT :)
Bateman Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 7:56 PM
Another beautifully-done piece here Terry. I will mark you as one of my favorite poets since some of your works venture into my passion for writing similar kinds of verse. Great Job my friend!! Cheers, Gary
Duncan Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Nice win ,,,,, Happy New Year Terry ;}
Kendrick Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 1:08 PM
This reminds me of a poem by a famous person..I can't think right offhand who it is..Seems like it is the work The Raven by Poe but not sure..I like the rhythm, rhyme, and flow to the work..Thanks for stopping by ...Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest Terry. Love, Carol
Tsiluma Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 4:05 AM
Congrats Terry! You've done a swell job with the imagery. I love it!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 1:37 AM
Well done another fantastic write Terry xx
A   Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 1:09 PM
Terry :-) A wonderful congratulations in Craig's "Night-Dark-Black-Happy-Sad" contest. Nice reading and supporting all his winners. have a nice and wonderful day, *PD
Onclaud Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 9:32 AM
love the honesty of it all.. congrats terry on your award!..;) huggs!
May Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 4:48 AM
congrats on your win Terry
Liwayway Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 10:03 PM
beautifully written poem friend Terry..Congratulations!! cheers!! :)
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 8:54 PM
Well done, congratulations on your win. Lee
Grisetti Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 6:26 PM
A scary Halloween poem, but so well done. Congratulations.
Mac Donald Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 10:21 AM
Eeeek, I think I started envisioning this too much, it's freaky scary! The last stanza chases off the perturbing previous ones, thank you!:) You maintain an even flow and keep one enthralled by the imagery. BOO!!:) Best wishes, Mikki
May Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 11:48 AM
this is somewhat similar to "The Raven" by Poe...well written...love...Joseph
Lander Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 10:50 AM
You are a wonderful poet, with each line i can tell you given it your all and most of all you i.. its show in your work
Loveless Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 12:01 PM
Haha I love this (:
Song Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Hiya Terry, not only did I get a great spooky rhyme, I got a lesson in poetry too...very smooth rhythmical rhyme! Enjoyed each dark ghouly line! gwendolen
Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 8:19 PM
like the way it flows and knows, the ghoulish nether bit, quaint of tongue sort of shows, the double rhymes are just it....
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