P.S. Awtry Poet Rhyme

Dark Anxious Whispers

should joy or gratitude I find
and dance with them in dreams of bliss
dark anxious whispers will remind
that dangers lurk in hiddenness


12/29/2018

"Fear is a slinking cat I find beneath the lilacs of my mind." - Sophie Tunnell

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Michael Wise January 2, 2019 at 3:53 PM Ahh, the endless struggle between darkness and light! Sure makes life interesting! Well done! :) P.S. Awtry January 2, 2019 at 4:00 PM thx Michael :)

Gary Smith January 1, 2019 at 5:36 PM Short and sweet and much enjoyed. :) P.S. Awtry January 1, 2019 at 5:53 PM thank you so much! :)

Michelle Faulkner December 31, 2018 at 2:11 PM The thin line between joy and turmoil, gracefully executed! P.S. Awtry December 31, 2018 at 4:38 PM Thank you, Michelle for stopping by and for your kind words :)

Gershon Wolf December 30, 2018 at 6:50 PM I love these kind of poems. Short with a potent punch. Shades of Emily Dickinson's style, methinks. A FAVE! Best wishes, Gershon P.S. Awtry December 31, 2018 at 8:57 AM Thank you Gershon! So glad you liked it! :)

Caren Krutsinger December 30, 2018 at 12:41 PM "dangers lurk in hiddenness" - this is something the people who are doing mean things are counting on. It resonated with me. Bring it into the light, and it shall be dissolved I think. P.S. Awtry December 30, 2018 at 1:32 PM Thank you, Caren :)

Line Gauthier December 30, 2018 at 7:58 AM Well penned, PS. P.S. Awtry December 30, 2018 at 9:37 AM Thank you, Line :) I much prefer YOUR more positive interpretation!

Wren Rushing December 30, 2018 at 7:45 AM A lovely cautious reminder! P.S. good luck on the contest. P.S. Awtry December 30, 2018 at 9:36 AM Thank you, Wren :) Wishing you and yours many blessings in the new year!

Andrew Fairchild December 30, 2018 at 12:27 AM This is great! Wise observation, and leaves one pondering. I LOVE it. P.S. Awtry December 30, 2018 at 9:26 AM Thank you, Andrew :)