Dark and Mystical

Night folds its shroud of darkness around me
As I stand alone on the edge of the cold still water
The distant moon lights a path toward the heavens, I see
Clearly, I hear your whispering voice, my daughter

My world lies shattered at my feet, this night
Will it ever end, my pain shatters into a thousand single shards
Shredding my heart, clouds gather taking all light
Your departing shadow embraces me as your heart discards

The love offered, blemished, tattered, torn
Then the silent dark clouds part, a single star ignites new hope
And in this lonely place I see a reflection reborn
Confidence regained, trust renewed, and I know I will cope…


April 10, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Enriquez Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 6:06 AM
Dear Huberta: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 8:32 AM
This is so sad, I am glad you imbedded a glimmer of hope. Congratulations on this heartfilled win.
Walker  Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 3:10 AM
Congratulations Huberta on you win in the contest. Verlena
Mehta Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 1:17 AM
Wonderful win in the contest, congratulations. huberta
A  Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 11:02 PM
Hi Huberta, lovely win , love ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 7:10 PM
Huberta,, Congratulations, on your awesome win.... xox~ LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 2:50 PM
very deep intense poem Huberta congrats on placing and ty for taking part hugs
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