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Dark and Mystical

Dark and Mystical The darkness of a moon shadowed star covered my world in a filament of doubt, awakened beings from a slumbering peace to roam the ethereal plain of life’s edges. Worms danced in the dampened cool entranced by the music of the mist, coyotes bristled at the unknown stilled by a presence yet unseen. Fairies, nymphs, demonic succubi adrift in passionless desire, shapeless beings, homeless waifs, wandering in search-less seeking. Lovers of the flimsy heart of night in delicate submission to its fate succumb – because they are the darkness of a moon shadowed star. 3/29/2014 for Shadow Hamilton Dark and Mystical

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Date: 4/13/2014 8:49:00 AM
Stunning imagery, you have incapsulated the theme Beautifuly. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/13/2014 3:28:00 AM
OOOhhh, get a creepy feeling from this- VERY WELL DONE!
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Date: 4/13/2014 1:14:00 AM
Wonderful win in the contest, congratulations. john
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Date: 4/12/2014 11:00:00 PM
John, congrats. , love ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/12/2014 7:08:00 PM
Hi John, this is lovely.. , Congratulations, on your awesome win.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 4/12/2014 4:21:00 PM
This is so good. Well done
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Date: 4/12/2014 2:40:00 PM
stunning John congrats on placing and ty for taking part hugs
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John Lawless
Date: 4/12/2014 4:39:00 PM
Thank you for keeping the muse on point and for your dedication to Poetrysoup and the contests. It is always amazing to see the variations on the same theme they bring forth.
Date: 3/29/2014 9:06:00 AM
This is awesome! Loved it
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John Lawless
Date: 4/12/2014 4:41:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting. Always nice to know that someone appreciated one of my poems.

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