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Dark and dangerous like a secret

Dark and dangerous like a secret The evolution of Human beings Did we came from apes Or were they Adam and Eve Dark and Dangerous like a secret The existence of God Did He create us or is it just a myth If yes then which religion to follow Dark and dangerous like a secret The promise of heaven A place of gardens and happiness With rivers, food and equality The darkness and vastness of universe Black holes, wormholes the galaxies,planets aliens,how big it is, dark an dangerous like a secret After my death, will I be resurrected Will I go to heaven or hell Or shall there be darkness If darkness then I may never know All this, shh, is dark and dangerous like a secret 3 June 2018 20 lines, for the contest " Free Verse Only, Pick a theme " Sponsor " Laura Loo "

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Date: 7/8/2018 11:18:00 AM
Like it I do believe we came from both but after the apes were improved Love it my friend
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 7/8/2018 11:25:00 AM
Lol man it is only a poem, I am a muslim
Date: 6/16/2018 11:14:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Faraz. Well done.
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Date: 6/8/2018 10:39:00 AM
Faraz, nicely done and the use of repeated lines,in your written verse. Congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/8/2018 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Faraz :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:04:00 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:52:00 AM
such questions I often ask myself Faraz, very interesting take on the prompt. thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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