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Dark and Dangerous Like a Secret

dark and dangerous like a secret, how deep, how far does the cave go? the melody of running water, shimmering, our helmet light reveals a dangerous cascade, flowing inwards, down a steep rocky chasm, on we go. hidden wonders, they were all secrets. giant selenite crystals, gypsum the worlds biggest, lacelike, translucent. bacteria slime drips then turn upward to join a buddy in pitch blackness, why? where? if you are into earth's deepest dark cave secrets, for their safety, keep them secret unto yourselves. I hold a secret from a dark dangerous place. where, well I can not tell you, its a secret I can show you a picture I took. look, did you see, a gypsum crystal, this tale not fiction, a secret, oh yes! Free Verse Only- Pick a Theme Poetry Contest - Sponsored by Laura Loo 05/29/18

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Date: 6/16/2018 10:50:00 PM
Well penned. Congrats on your podium finish, Mick.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/17/2018 8:49:00 AM
Many thanks Line for your appreciation, and for drawing my attention to the first two comments, thanks again. Mick
Date: 6/8/2018 8:10:00 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Mick :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/17/2018 8:45:00 AM
Sorry, probably overlooked yours and luloo's comment due to the Mrs being poorly, (still is), much-appreciated Anne-Lise, thank you! Mick
Date: 6/8/2018 7:40:00 AM
great poem Mick, such questions I oft ask myself. thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/17/2018 8:44:00 AM
Sorry, probably overlooked yours and Anne-Lise's comment due to the Mrs being poorly, (still is), much-appreciated luloo, thank you! Mick

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