Dark Ambient Force

in brooding repose swift shadows collaborate — tangible unrest 6/5/2019 Writing Challenge 5, May 2019, Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsor - Dear Heart
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Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 3:43 PM
very cool final line there, Kim. Congrats on a fantastic win.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
La France Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Thank you so much <3 Kim
Ashley Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 9:06 PM
Kim, your senryu captivates with intense and compelling emotion. Superb! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:21 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Wolf Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:10 PM
Potent brew here, Kim. G.L. in the contest! ~ gw
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Proxenos Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 11:09 AM
Hi Kim, This sound like its best for a win - such poetic flair - shadows collaborate, tangible unrest - love this write Kim. Hugs, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Thank you!
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June 5, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Ooh I like this. Great palpable atmosphere! Good luck in the contest, a winner for me ;) xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Thank you, dear poet!
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