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Dark Ambient Force

in brooding repose swift shadows collaborate — tangible unrest 6/5/2019 Writing Challenge 5, May 2019, Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsor - Dear Heart

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2019 3:43:00 PM

very cool final line there, Kim. Congrats on a fantastic win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2019 5:11:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Constance La France

Date: 6/10/2019 11:08:00 AM

Kim, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2019 5:11:00 PM

Thank you so much <3 Kim

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/5/2019 9:06:00 PM

Kim, your senryu captivates with intense and compelling emotion. Superb! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 10:21:00 PM

Thank you, Susan!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2019 6:10:00 PM

Potent brew here, Kim. G.L. in the contest! ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 6:59:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/5/2019 11:09:00 AM

Hi Kim, This sound like its best for a win - such poetic flair - shadows collaborate, tangible unrest - love this write Kim. Hugs, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 6:59:00 PM

Thank you!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/5/2019 9:17:00 AM

Ooh I like this. Great palpable atmosphere! Good luck in the contest, a winner for me ;) xomo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 9:41:00 AM

Thank you, dear poet!