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I closed my eyes and found serenity in the dark.

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Date: 2/17/2016 9:58:00 PM
I find peace and serenity there quite often too... Another lovely poem from you, Hans. Great work!
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:50:00 PM
awesome win! Congrats.
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:14:00 PM
Congrats Hans!!
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Date: 2/9/2016 4:08:00 PM
Hansteven, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "How Shocking" if You like... AN honor to have you support my contest. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/9/2016 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:11:00 AM
Ah, I like this. Instant serenity. Glad to be acquainted with your work, kabayan!
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Date: 2/3/2016 6:04:00 PM
Yes, there can be a lot of things to ponder peacefully, sir!
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Date: 2/2/2016 3:23:00 AM
short yet so powerful!!! like it Hans.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/31/2016 9:47:00 PM
Short, sweet, and right to the point! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/31/2016 5:20:00 PM
A very nice monoku ... best wishes
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Date: 1/31/2016 12:55:00 PM
Yes, the dark can be profound. Good job, Hansteven. Janice
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Date: 1/31/2016 10:40:00 AM
A lovely monoku, Hansteven. Closing eyes can be restful and inspiring. // paul
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Date: 1/28/2016 5:12:00 AM
serenity in the darkness of a closed eyes? it always feel good, but it doesn't feel right....excellent write Hansteven
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:08:00 PM
this is so nice. Is it for the monoku contest? You should enter it in one of those!!!
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Date: 1/26/2016 7:43:00 PM
Very nice, Hansteven, and very true! Nicely said. Sandra
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Date: 1/26/2016 3:48:00 PM
Nice write Hans, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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