Dark

I closed my eyes and found serenity in the dark.
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Deschler Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:58 PM
I find peace and serenity there quite often too... Another lovely poem from you, Hans. Great work!
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:50 PM
awesome win! Congrats.
Milliner Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Congrats Hans!!
A   Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Hansteven, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "How Shocking" if You like... AN honor to have you support my contest. ~LINDA~
Gentry Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Nunez Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 4:11 AM
Ah, I like this. Instant serenity. Glad to be acquainted with your work, kabayan!
Beaufort Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Yes, there can be a lot of things to ponder peacefully, sir!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 3:23 AM
short yet so powerful!!! like it Hans.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
Anish Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Short, sweet, and right to the point! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
May Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:20 PM
A very nice monoku ... best wishes
Canerdy Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Yes, the dark can be profound. Good job, Hansteven. Janice
Callus Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 10:40 AM
A lovely monoku, Hansteven. Closing eyes can be restful and inspiring. // paul
Sage Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 5:12 AM
serenity in the darkness of a closed eyes? it always feel good, but it doesn't feel right....excellent write Hansteven
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:08 PM
this is so nice. Is it for the monoku contest? You should enter it in one of those!!!
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Very nice, Hansteven, and very true! Nicely said. Sandra
Muzzey Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Nice write Hans, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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