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Dare We

one end of the net
is always open
the way we swam in
but gossamer like patterns
exert a hypnotic pull
trapping us therein 

there now remains no choice
except to liquefy form
becoming the water element 
to secure release

14-November-2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buhagiar Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 10:10 PM
Good idea to liquefy oneself, but then can you rerun back?
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