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Dare To Be Challenged

DARE TO BE CHALLENGED Imagine if a human could shed their skin, Inside out and from within, We could then see anything foul, We would bare our brain, heart and soul Anything suspicious we would detect, From our toes to our head, We would be able to label humans suspect, Or else quite correct, as we had checked! Technology will one day do just this, If one’s mind is on merely giving a kiss Or perhaps we could single out a criminal, Programmed intensely, techno and digital. But this sounds so advanced, science fiction, To us today, sounds like work of magician, For if indeed our souls can be examined Are we still destined for heaven or challenged?

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/30/2020 6:29:00 AM

Very good question ...

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 5/6/2020 10:22:00 AM

Hi Kai, we hope its the first option, for if the answer to the 2nd part of the last line is challenged, we must look deep into our souls and question ourselves. Blessings, Jennifer.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/14/2020 3:25:00 PM

Hi Jenn~ We are already hawked by Google and most search engines. Now they want to track us by smartphones? They always have, anyway. Leave your smartphone at home. By a cheaper one that is trackless. Very sharp poem, Jennifer Mou, Panagiota xx

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/23/2020 12:13:00 PM

Hi Panagiota, so right you are my dear friend. Yesterday we actually got spam mail threatening us that the have all our details and will destroy us - my husband answered the email with two words only! Hope you are keeping well - always in my thoughts ,love and hugs Jennifer.

Daniel Schack

Date: 4/13/2020 2:53:00 PM

thank you for feedback on mine. like this poem a lot. perhaps corona, if not punishment for humankinds evil may as well be. who knows. be well. stay well.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/13/2020 2:56:00 PM

Thank-you Daniel, I will be reading your poems - stay safe! Glad you enjoyed my poem. Blessings, Jennifer.

David Smith

Date: 4/13/2020 2:15:00 AM

Trouble is the people who administer theses things are always exempt. Excellent example of your skills as a poet. STAY safe David

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/13/2020 3:29:00 AM

You are right David, the are always exempt! A lovely compliment on my poem, thank-you. Hope all is well in NZ and that you and your family are keeping well and safe. Blessings, Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/10/2020 10:57:00 PM

Hello Jennifer … since the mid eighties, technology has moved faster than many humans trying to cope with it. Science fiction is something of the past now - thank you Jennifer, stay safe - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/11/2020 1:10:00 PM

You are right Lindsay, but becoming more and more advanced, and soon we will be challenged to take one of two paths in life, here our faith will guide us. Thank you Lindsay for a lovely comment - be safe, blessings, Jennifer.

Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/10/2020 6:09:00 PM

Lovely Poem. You never know some of this could be just around the corner. Stay well JC Hawkens

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/11/2020 1:01:00 PM

What you mention is a dire concern, already our lives are not private, just put our name into google and lots comes up stay safe and well - wishes to you and yours. Blessings, Jennifer

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/10/2020 4:26:00 PM

Fine write Jenny, you bring up many a thought to challenge us all.Hope you're doing ok, keep safe and well, Blessings,Gordon

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/11/2020 12:51:00 PM

Thank-you Gordon, hope you and your wife are doing well and keeping safe, this virus is MEAN! Blessings my good faithful friend, keep spreading your word, we all need it. Blessings, Jennifer.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/9/2020 2:23:00 PM

Love this thoughtful piece

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/11/2020 12:48:00 PM

Jack you are a deep thinker and a philosopher - I love your input. Blessings and safe thoughts, Jennifer.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/8/2020 6:53:00 PM

YOU'RE in the vein...That's how it's going to be...We may not live to see it, although we are at the beginning... I like your vision

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/11/2020 12:45:00 PM

Thank-you Arturo dear friend - no we won't be around and it doesn't look like we will have grandchildren as both of or boys and their wives have opted not to bring children into this chaotic world.A great comment. Hugs and blessings ad safe thoughts, Jennifer

David Mchattie

Date: 4/8/2020 12:46:00 PM

Everyone wheres a mask of some sort. I think we would all dread being shown for what we really are. Would that make us better or would our level of deceit just increase to compensate? Hard to say. I feel we would adapt and not for the better. A great poem my friend. Stay strong and well.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/11/2020 12:41:00 PM

Hi David, what a lovely comment, thank-you - what you say is true, should it be that we adapted it would probably not be for the better. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer,

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/8/2020 12:19:00 PM

Hello Jennifer, Something to think about. I rather go back in time. When sitting on a bench in a park chatting to someone. A chat on the phone, family gather chatting non stop. Enjoy your day my friend. Stay safe. Hugs Darlene xx

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/11/2020 4:31:00 AM

I think you Darlene and Sunshine Smile are right - I would also come with you back in time, but think of the Plague in London and the great Fire and the 1st WW an the Spanish flu and before then, not even Penicillin, so it seems that every era has its dangers and challenges. Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/8/2020 11:58:00 AM

- Technology today is more than enough for me - I'd rather go back in time ... more time for human contact - But ... who knows what will happen in the future? - Interesting and well written, dear friend Jenny :) - Stay safe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/11/2020 4:22:00 AM

Unfortunately, our children and our grand children will have to suffer the decisions of future governments - quite a scary thought. Thanks my friend for any awesome comment, what will I do for a year or so, too long - love you stay safe Jennifer