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Dare Not Fall Asleep

Too early daylight breaks as I lie here in your arms the wind blows through the leaves as I fall victim to your charms last night I was your conquest today you are my king forever dominate me I will gladly kiss your ring my eyes I will close but I will dare not fall asleep while my restless soul and body yearns this memory doth en-sweep

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/7/2020 2:38:00 PM

A most delightful romantic poem, Angela. It emits a kind of afterglow! ~ Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/9/2020 9:03:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. I really appreciate you reading and commenting :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/15/2020 3:11:00 AM

Ah so sensual and pretty .

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/15/2020 8:40:00 AM

Thank you, Caren :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/14/2020 11:40:00 PM

This is so romantic. ~~

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/15/2020 8:40:00 AM

Thank you, Victor :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/14/2020 10:40:00 AM

Well composed Angela, oozing with romance. Tom

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/14/2020 5:34:00 PM

Thank you, Tom :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/14/2020 8:33:00 AM

The romantic imagery of your poem is expressed with delicate beauty, Angie. Your emotions are expressed with a silky pen, dear poetess. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/14/2020 5:34:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. :)