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Danny Boy

DANNY BOY 

Danny Boy!
I'm not your kind of girl
You own a He-Man classic toy
Rapping slams like She-Ra

Your slam has no style
 if I want to be put to death
I'll read your poems
See me yawning, 
You cry nobody loves you
Trying to end your life support
Give up the depression you made it through an abort
 
Your slam was full of crap
Come on Danny you smell like a rat
Give yourself some dignity 
Stop writing as if you're on crack
Don't tell me you got writers block
Right after you got hit by my glove
Stop writing as if you're in shock
Like pancakes, I made you flip flop
I'll use the excuse my computer just got hack
                ((LOL))
Take it easy on Danny C, 
Do not hurt me, by thinking I am your enemy.

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Cherl Dunn March 2, 2015 at 3:48 PM Dear Poet Destroyer, I've been here my friend, some of these guys here on the soup can be real #### if you catch my drift, great write take care great write, cheri

Justin Bordner September 9, 2012 at 12:44 PM Just another victim; nothing vsubtle about this venom PD. - J.A.B. %

Jack Horne September 6, 2012 at 1:38 PM I don't know the story behind this one, but great write, my friend. Hope you are having a great day xx

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet June 15, 2012 at 9:28 PM BRAVOOOO!!! GOOD STUFF P.D I AM FEELING YOUR SWAGGER!!!!

Elizabeth Wesley May 30, 2012 at 6:33 PM When you have something to say you sure do it with style. Some great lines in this one PD! Luv, Lizzie

David Smalling September 16, 2010 at 7:18 AM A natural, I must say, in the fun of this word play. Thanks for reading my poems, an dbeing friend

Anthony Beesley August 10, 2010 at 5:57 AM good,you just inspired a new nightmare

Ravindra K Kapoor August 4, 2010 at 7:14 AM In your style you are superb and in your changed style also you are dominating. Many thank for your precious comments on my 1st poem In the Memory of My Allen Forest and also your appreciations of Patradoot. Love and best wishes......Ravindra....Poet D

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 22, 2010 at 2:17 AM replied to Soup's blog go check it out-- haha I am gonna be replying to your soupmail but since my connection's all whacked better head on to the blog first since it might forever take my reply to you to be sent ...nikko :)

David Byrne July 16, 2010 at 6:19 PM I like your punch!

Rinki Nandy June 28, 2010 at 3:34 PM "I'll use the excuse my computer just got hack. ((LOL)" this particular line was really funny. enjoyed reading it. keep it up and thank you for your lovely words on my poems.

Mitch White June 25, 2010 at 11:11 PM Would you quit beating up these boys lol I changed my Footle back to our muse and entered it.. taps fingers

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2010 at 9:20 PM oh, boy, what to do what to do? I already entered the other one, PD. Another person thought she would like the other one better. So you think the one on the bard? I bet I can't switch it out now. Nikko likes to read her poems fast. I don't even LOOK at the ones in MY contest until the night I read them. Anybody who wanted to could switch a poem and I would not know it. haha. well, I was here for four hours. good grief. I better get off. LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2010 at 9:07 PM Yes, that is in nikko's weird contest leaving out letters! I could not decide between the two little poems. What do you think? is it the better of the two?

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2010 at 8:57 PM p.d Here, let me help out poor Danny Boy a bit. Not getting all the attention of your other poems. heehee. Thanks for your comment. I appreciate friends like you on Poetrysoup. YOu make it all worthwhile. LUv, Andrea

Heather Hill June 23, 2010 at 5:53 PM Very lovely, you really stuck it to him lol, I love it!! nice write indeed :) thanks for the love on my work, please check out my new piece "Musical Mental Disorder" :)

Daver Austin June 23, 2010 at 2:19 PM "Oh, Danny Boy, the pipes, the pipes are playing." This is a song I play every day - a beautiful, traditional Scottish ballad. Ah,though, your Danny Boy may not be so beautiful. Love, daver

Joseph Spence Sr June 23, 2010 at 9:51 AM This is excellent. The rap flows very well. You should be on the Rap Nation Contest. It started in Chicago and has some awesome prizes to offer. Great job! Joseph

Sruthi Ajith June 23, 2010 at 1:22 AM i`ll pray that danny won`t hurt u again thinking u r his enemy.nice work. really entertaining.

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2010 at 8:44 PM I love that name Danny Boy. I had a first crush on one. So you be nice to whoever this is now, p.D! Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown June 22, 2010 at 5:21 AM It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning PD. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol

Lynette Chachere June 21, 2010 at 6:52 PM by the way, i had an ex and i called him Danny boy. you have so many slammers? do you ever get crazy Sid. ~always.. on to the next, i am having fun reading(:

Lynette Chachere June 21, 2010 at 6:27 PM lol.sorry it took me so long to reply back just now.i got a new phone, and was switching my sim cards. and hmm, its the last enigma, because after this one, Veronica Lynn is only capable of writing the rest, and not only that, but she is writing the book...this last one is her as a little grl, and the little boy, which her best friend/lover/twin flame. lol.she wants to take u on, but i keep telling her nooo. ~Always

Daniel Corcoran June 21, 2010 at 12:10 PM right done my response now PD. its called by the power of greyskull. i think i may have gone to easy on you again though

Dakarai Cobb June 21, 2010 at 11:57 AM keep knockin em out p.d. why do they insist on challenging you. when you are done, maybe i can get some practice by cleaning up the scraps.

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