DANIELLE’S TRAP

SEPARATIST TRAP

DANIELLE SMITH LOOKS LIKE A SAP

FOR HER FEELS LIKE SLAP
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 23, 2026 at 4:43 PM
Richard, you have utilized the senryu form quite cleverly here! The lines hit the traditional 5-7-5 syllable count perfectly, and your use of a continuous rhyme (trap/sap/slap) gives the piece a remarkably punchy, rhythmic delivery. It is a very sharp and structurally concise verse!
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August 23, 2026 at 6:12 PM
thank you. Truly appreciated.
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