Dani

Today she had her hair tied back

She never looks in my dirction

Just giving me something to look at

Somedays she sees me drawing

And ask whats that

Little does she know its her

I've become obsessed with her smell

Not having it is hell

I love the way I'd never dare

To talk to her its not fair

I sit right behind her

Yet I'm so far away

For the under-dog

There will come a day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Eckiwaudah Avatar
June 11, 2009 at 7:23 AM
nice write.
Bilyeu Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 11:16 AM
awsomely written Jade i love it!!!
Harper Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 12:09 PM
This is very uhhhhh ok nice thats what u say all the time so very nicei wood give it a 1000000000000 if i could
Moreno Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 11:50 AM
Your work continues to strengthen and grow. Good work...Raul
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