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Dani

Today she had her hair tied back She never looks in my dirction Just giving me something to look at Somedays she sees me drawing And ask whats that Little does she know its her I've become obsessed with her smell Not having it is hell I love the way I'd never dare To talk to her its not fair I sit right behind her Yet I'm so far away For the under-dog There will come a day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/11/2009 7:23:00 AM
nice write.
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Date: 4/27/2009 11:16:00 AM
awsomely written Jade i love it!!!
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Date: 4/14/2009 12:09:00 PM
This is very uhhhhh ok nice thats what u say all the time so very nicei wood give it a 1000000000000 if i could
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Date: 4/14/2009 11:50:00 AM
Your work continues to strengthen and grow. Good work...Raul
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