James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Dangling

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       Dangling from each
              the poets
           their thoughts
      what no soul expects

In the poet's mind's treasure
                  love
                  lust
                  pain
                   all
      measures of desire
              it's burst

       too uncontrollable
                  fire

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Sharon Winter April 5, 2011 at 7:35 AM wow indeed! this quite brilliant in my humble opinion. love it! thank you kindly dear James for your thoughtful visit to my poem, much appreciated. hope life is good. hugs, shar xo

Wilma Neels September 22, 2010 at 7:22 AM James, this is a jewel of a write, now I feel content after reading it.. Thank you for your comment it made me smile :) B G Wilma

Skat A September 19, 2010 at 12:05 PM Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta September 16, 2010 at 10:20 AM Wonderful entry to the contest of Thought of the poet, James.ood luck in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 16, 2010 at 10:11 AM Enjoyed reading your poetry today James. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich September 16, 2010 at 12:05 AM Nikko's contest here is inpiring so many wonderful writes. this is among them, high in my estimation. LUv,Andrea

Sara Kendrick September 15, 2010 at 3:06 PM Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for writing one in response to my questions..I am glad that I stopped by here today...Keep the gifted pen flowing..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 15, 2010 at 12:53 PM James this would make an amazing entry for the 29 Words contest... u might be one word short but go for it luv... and Sara is a true inspiration on Soup.. we lift her up in prayer today as she goes for her spinal treatment..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire September 15, 2010 at 12:44 PM How well you describe the many emotions that pour forth in our poetry, dear James. It is this "uncontrollable fire" that keeps us writing! Excellent poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn