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"Dangerous Territory" The wash slides over naked minds and feet the sands of time pull you in unexpected inviting secrets whispered in your ears too late to turn do you take the message to heart or burn it as flotsam, jetsam, a wayward dream fair weather friends fast warning loose charter dangerous territory somersaults backwards out of the drowning to certainty's sure so close yet so far outer edge of the storm your heart a treasure box locked for bursting no warning unsigned, dangerous territory (LadyLabyrinth / 2022) “Prime Time of Your Life” / Pomplamoose https://youtu.be/-nvJVht1LQs alternative https://youtu.be/gQVeAkcvYfQ

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Ts Poetry

Date: 9/26/2022 1:16:00 PM

The treasures not fully hidden waiting to be unlocked...really like this L

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/26/2022 2:27:00 PM

https://www.betterhealth.vic.gov.au/health/healthyliving/internet-addiction#internet-addiction-is-controversial

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/26/2022 2:23:00 PM

Thank you “Danger-is-my-middle-name-Schmidt”. People are spending inordinately long periods of time immersed in the web and technology, before they realise it, it has taken away their ability to ‘LIVE’ life as it should be lived, many find themselves losing large chunks of time in their life and they are swallowed up by all manner of addictions. For some it leads to unopened boxes and a set of bars, the standard of which even when opened to Life again, sees them sliding bars of another form. The web, which once was seen as a good thing, becomes a prison for most. In most definitions, the web, is dangerous territory.

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 9/26/2022 3:55:00 AM

"Prime Time of Your Life"/Pomplamoose. unable to embed as primary.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/26/2022 3:55:00 AM

https://youtu.be/-nvJVht1LQs