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Dangerous Minds

riding rivulets down
insane power of drain
mist erupts, exclamation crashes
the edge of humanity
at the rainbow’s end
the beauty screams:
c’mon in
pins and needles
from the parietal lobe
to the sole

the droplets
run and dive
right in, exploding in laughter
and delight

man is afraid
rightfully so
afraid to decompose 

composure
is at wit’s end

we slip, we slide
in our mind
feel the sinking sand
on the brink
of a dream; a nightmare
fully awake

its wake divides the truth from lies
do we exist
take a kiss from the cliff
the teacher’s ruler:
Go on now…

What student doesn’t know better
unless you see other fish
flying overboard
peer pressure stops at heightened levels

except on slow boil
then
the facts become even more exact
as you meet
the boil Maker

1/7/2022
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Cunningham Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 11:48 AM
Powerful verse Kim, great picture to accompany it. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 1:08 PM
Happy Weekend to you too! :)
Pandit Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 11:43 AM
I am faving this poem for your exquisite vocabulary my friend: mist erupts, exclamation crashes--the edge of humanity at the rainbow’s end....its wake divides the truth from lies..do we exist.. take a kiss from the cliff....
Rodrigues Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 11:45 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! :)
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