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riding rivulets down insane power of drain mist erupts, exclamation crashes the edge of humanity at the rainbow’s end the beauty screams: c’mon in pins and needles from the parietal lobe to the sole the droplets run and dive right in, exploding in laughter and delight man is afraid rightfully so afraid to decompose composure is at wit’s end we slip, we slide in our mind feel the sinking sand on the brink of a dream; a nightmare fully awake its wake divides the truth from lies do we exist take a kiss from the cliff the teacher’s ruler: Go on now… What student doesn’t know better unless you see other fish flying overboard peer pressure stops at heightened levels except on slow boil then the facts become even more exact as you meet the boil Maker 1/7/2022

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Date: 1/7/2022 11:48:00 AM
Powerful verse Kim, great picture to accompany it. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2022 1:08:00 PM
Happy Weekend to you too! :)
Date: 1/7/2022 11:43:00 AM
I am faving this poem for your exquisite vocabulary my friend: mist erupts, exclamation crashes--the edge of humanity at the rainbow’s end....its wake divides the truth from lies..do we exist.. take a kiss from the cliff....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2022 11:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! :)

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