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Dangerous Minds

Oh no failed to strike or touch a nerve again So nothing new here move along Maybe i'm just not cut out for this after all Living in a Gangsta Rap Paradise Coolio point obtuse missed How can i get through to the projects or reach these kid's at South Park elementary If the best of word's i have to give so far haven't reached out to or touched a single soul thus far

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Date: 11/4/2020 6:03:00 AM
perhaps they have...this one, is one of your better ones. Comments come and go...people read they do not comment...but 'people' are more than what's contained in the soup pot. Other readers unknown, outside the confines of this boiling, suffocating fondue ... find what needs to be read, eventually.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/4/2020 7:29:00 AM
Leanne cheers my nate as always , Exactly what you said and have you noticed or something i have noticed as well lately is a lot of supposed new faces who seem to be old ones just using new aliases and fresh avatars but still spouting the same old recipes from the same old book

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