Dangerous Minds

Oh no failed to strike or
touch a nerve again

So nothing new here move along  

Maybe i'm just not cut out
for this after all

Living in a Gangsta Rap Paradise 

Coolio point obtuse missed

How can i get through to the
projects or reach these kid's 
at South Park elementary

If the best of word's i have to give
so far haven't reached out to or
touched a single soul thus far
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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November 4, 2020 at 6:03 AM
perhaps they have...this one, is one of your better ones. Comments come and go...people read they do not comment...but 'people' are more than what's contained in the soup pot. Other readers unknown, outside the confines of this boiling, suffocating fondue ... find what needs to be read, eventually.
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November 4, 2020 at 7:29 AM
Leanne cheers my nate as always , Exactly what you said and have you noticed or something i have noticed as well lately is a lot of supposed new faces who seem to be old ones just using new aliases and fresh avatars but still spouting the same old recipes from the same old book
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