Chamonique Knowles Poet Free verse

Dangerous Love

I see you
And my heart 
Leaps into my throat
You touch me 
And my pulse quickens 
You kiss me
And I loose my breath
You speak to me
And all words are forgotten
Love weakens me
Ruins me
Breaks me
Destroys me
But it makes me so happy
You make me so very happy

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 11, 2009 at 2:56 PM Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Brandee Augustus March 11, 2009 at 10:48 AM Very, very nice. It flows with perfection!

Vince Suzadail Jr. March 11, 2009 at 10:38 AM Congrats Chamonique, on "Dangerous Love" being featured. This is the nice kind of danger. God Bless. Vince

Maryam Jameela Haniff March 10, 2009 at 3:22 PM congrats on this great poem being featured this week!.MJ*

Sue Mason March 9, 2009 at 5:09 PM Now if it just lasts ... smile ... very provocative write here Chamonique and an excellent choice by the Soup to be a feature this week. Congratulations!

John Heck March 9, 2009 at 12:04 PM Chamonique - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter March 9, 2009 at 6:41 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan March 8, 2009 at 6:08 PM Chamonique - what a wonderful name - I reckon all love is dangerous in the beginning - maybe thats the excitement of it all - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

March 8, 2009 at 5:49 PM Glad you are happy. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen