Dane Earmarked-W

The year 2000 about to done with, and only the Atlantic Ocean divides us. Now around me the snow falls. If I could see you in months, I shall turn the months in snowballs. All January will sever me, A step more- February will brush, March will bring you closer, Spring will remind me of you, May-wreaths will bind me, and...Denmark not far away in June. Oh, How would it be? After such a long wait, How would I greet thee? But Alas!My boat was on a smooth sail in June Undaunted to find the land to sow the seeds, but missed a little rain. Unlike Columbus, dolefully sailed back. What was to turn to reality became a distant dream. That dream stays with me altering the colour of emotions. The love remains well, The rest is unsavory. Indeed misery outlives the joy Denmark remains a distant dream.
+++++++ November 30, 2014 Form : Lyric Contest: Waking Dreams by Gautami Phookan ============================ October 31, 2014 Form: Lyric Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest:C'est la vie by Judy Konos ===================== April 5, 2014 Form Lyric Sixth Place Win Contest: Many Miles Away by Roger Horsch
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Deschler Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 5:00 PM
No one ever stops wondering about the choices they make in life, and if we still can dream it, then it can be made a reality... Congrats on your win with this great poem! I really enjoyed it, Dr. Ram!
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November 13, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Congrats on the win Dr Ram
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November 13, 2014 at 2:18 PM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Nice imagery and structure. It was an enjoyable read. Congratulations on the win. Earl
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November 13, 2014 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.
Taylor Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 7:02 AM
Congrats Dr. Mehta. Excellent piece. Ralph
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November 12, 2014 at 8:41 PM
A wonderful win, Dr. Ram ! Congratulations on your number one poem!
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November 12, 2014 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:33 PM
many congrats on your win Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan x
Kayode Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Don't worry Dr.,seeing Denmark will still be just a matter of time. Congrats on the win
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November 12, 2014 at 2:46 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram. Your poem was very touching. Sandra
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November 12, 2014 at 1:43 PM
Very nice, Dr. Ram, such a unique approach describing your uncompleted journey. One of your best for me...2000? This piece would be a fort-year old and I love it.
Parker Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 6:38 PM
congratulations Dr Ram on a well deserved win
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April 7, 2014 at 6:04 PM
DR., Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you for sharing how far your distance goes. ~SKAT~
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April 7, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram, This is a very good poem........Roger
Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Thanks
Maverick Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 3:22 AM
Good to see your featured poem D Ram, also found it a refreshing read..
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Dr.Ram. Love, Carol
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September 26, 2011 at 8:46 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your lyric "Dane Marks" being featured. Vince
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September 26, 2011 at 12:07 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on featured poem this week on PS.. great write to share luv..
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