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DANDELION WISHES

DANDELION WISHES ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The moon, a silver coin tossed high, hangs in the velvet sky. Dandelions, ghosts in the grass, glow faintly, catching borrowed light. Each puff is a soft, silent prayer carried on the breeze, destination unknown. “Do they reach the moon, these tiny seeds of longing? Or do they tangle in the stardust, blooming anew on some distant world? The moon offers no answers, only the quiet solace of its unwavering gaze. I look upward, hearing only the soft, persistent murmurs of the evening breeze blowing across the grass
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Gauthier Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 9:19 PM
I love how your mind dreams up such lovely scenarios of sweetness, Sara ~
Lawless Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 5:29 AM
MAGNIFICENT!!! had me closing my eyes and allowing he scene to play out in my mind..."a silver coin tossed high", I shall forever see the moon as such and wonder...heads or tails....
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 6:13 PM
awww, thank you, John. Your comments made my day. I take great delight in knowing my words had a positive impact...enjoy your evening, Sara
Rose  Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Oh I can hear the moon sighing after this one Sara, you have outdone yourself. :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 6:11 PM
awww, thank you, sweet Rose, for your uplifting comments. Grateful for you and your visit today, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 6:01 PM
Just beautiful…love the led in and the magical ending. Hugs ~ Kim
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 6:12 PM
thank you, Kim, for your visit and your kind words...enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara
Roberts Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 5:39 PM
that's so pretty
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 6:12 PM
thank you! appreciate your visit!
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