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   Line's Bitesize No 100 Contest      February 11, 2025

Dandelion Wishes

Walk with me where wildflowers grow
among weeds and thistle in the meadow.
We'll share memories from years gone by.
Then, hold hands beneath a lavender sky,
and make a wish on dandelion wings of gold.
That's how they come true, so I've been told.

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Terry Miller February 16, 2025 at 2:04 PM Lovely little poem, congratulations

Duke Beaufort February 14, 2025 at 8:17 AM Lin, I have to wonder if this relates to the Van Gogh painting. Of course there are no trees here. May all of your wishes come true! I think the world would be a much better place! Lin Lane February 14, 2025 at 8:45 AM These lines were not influenced by Van Gogh... much too simple an interpretation on my part rather than something from out in left field. Thanks, Duke, and Happy Valentine's Day to you.

Susan Lawrence February 11, 2025 at 5:29 PM Lin, This takes me back to being a young girl and picking dandelions with my younger sisters . We would wish and blow their fluff to the sky …. Then pick another and repeat ! Big hugs, Susan :) Lin Lane February 12, 2025 at 5:56 AM My sister and I grew up in the country, so we did the same. Thank you very much, Susan.

Beryl Edmonds February 11, 2025 at 5:08 PM That’s lovely Lin, reminds me of the days when my sisters and I would blow dandelion wishes up to the sky… Beryl Lin Lane February 12, 2025 at 5:56 AM Recalling great childhood memories is always fun. Thanks, Beryl.

Abdullah Alhemaidy February 11, 2025 at 11:00 AM Beautiful poem! Wildlife and wildflowers are so natural in wild land. That's the main reason for me to love countrysides! Have a good day dear sweet poetess Lin Lane ~ AA Lin Lane February 12, 2025 at 5:55 AM The beauty of nature should never be taken for granted. Thank you, AA.

Victor Buhagiar February 11, 2025 at 9:27 AM I do feel dandelion flowers grant you great wishes. Lovely picture. Lin Lane February 11, 2025 at 9:43 AM Many thanks, Victor.

Kim Rodrigues February 11, 2025 at 6:40 AM Very nice! Brings sunshine on this rainy day. Lin Lane February 11, 2025 at 9:43 AM Thanks very much, Kim.