Dandelion Star

A star that was purchased recently
Was given the name Dandelion Star
As the cosmic wind blows every spring
Offsprings of Dandelion Star are born
Filling the second heaven with glow
Like the glow of your short life on earth
That filled the hearth and home of your family
God has given you a special place
For your Light to shine forever more
Oh! daughter precious child of God loved
For you I've purchased Dandelion Star
In the heavens as constant presence
And memory of  you my birth mother
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 5:51 PM
enjoyed mom--congrats on the win!!
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 9:40 PM
How lovely, I really like how you did this one Sara,Congratulations. Luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 2:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Shining Star poetry contest Sara. Love,Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Congrats Sara on your success in my "Shining Star" contest.. an excellent write and thankxxx for supporting my contest..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Muzzey Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 8:37 AM
A very nice write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Devonshire Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Sara, this was so moving. My mother is a "star" in the heavens now too, and I'm sorry for your loss. She's looking down on you with pride, dear poet. Love, Carolyn
Goff Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 6:21 AM
enlightening tribute! Sara! I'm taking my 80 yr. old Mother to the market today, she has a bad heart, and I cherish every moment with her, love, jimbo
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April 17, 2010 at 5:45 AM
My birth mother died when I was sixteen months old...I was told that she died of cancer...I have not been able to get a death certificate to find out what her cause of death actually was...She had four sons and one daughter spaced about five years apart..Four of my brothers died at around fifty-five years old and one lived to be sixty-five...I am the only surviving child of that family..
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