Dandelion Rain

dandelion seeds waltz in wind~ poured on wedding cake in rain

August 25, 2020

When plans dont go to plan Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Silent One
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Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 2:17 PM
so cute, Aditi!! Congrats for top spot.
Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 9:03 PM
Must have given the cake a mustardy flavor, eh?! Great one, Aditi. Congrats on your #1 top win in the contest. Cake and Icing, Gershon
Watt Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 3:54 PM
Oh no...I hope you like the taste of dandelion seeds! Nicely done, congratulations my friend ~ John
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 12:39 PM
- Congratulations on your TOP winning line, Aditi :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 10:56 AM
Congrats, Aditi on your first place win with this humerous - "oh, dear" monoku.
Roper Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 10:37 AM
Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Aditi. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations! Lovely imagery!
Callus Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on placing first in this contest, Aditi. A true case of plans going astray! ~ Regards // paul
Mitra Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 5:15 AM
Aditi this is as amazing as the lovely poems you pen....Congrats and much love.
Mcintosh Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 5:15 AM
A true beauty. Love it and congrats :) Bless you
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 4:03 AM
Congrats on your top win! Dandelions I have not seen in years in England but the memory is fresh!
One Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 2:41 AM
Great imagery and in only one line.... Congratulations on first place in the contest..
Deepa Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Woh,....I can imagine how that would feel. Lovely monoko dear Aditi mam.. Good luck for the contest.:-) I believe your doing fine.. Take care.Much love sent to you:-)
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