Dandelion Moves On

A blithesome royalty, sea of roses smile
      delicate faces spark in emerald pasture.
Vivid sunny weeds, dandelions fragile...
       no one cares, stems of careless rapture.

 Petals felled in wanton lawn mowers,
         roots still strong in moist warm blaze.
   Radiance return, blooming little flowers
       with lion's tooth, serrate leaves amaze.
         
  Sulfur glowing yellow, sleeps in moonlight,
     opalesque heads, new dream of stars
  Wakes up to sun, soft balls fluffed white,
     unburdened wings, fly hours after hours. 
             
 A pirouette dance of dandelion seeds
 in summer sky, holding hands of wind.
   Uprooted wafts fly, survive to breed,
 uncertain distant lands, hope gets pinned. 

  Blowing  birthday candles, wish of goodbye.... 
  pangs of separation, siblings all forlorn.
  They'll never be together, no tears to cry.
  Life moves on, another dandelion is born.



Dated 7th April 2019
Line Gauthier's Dandelion Contest
PLACED THIRD IN CONTEST
Also featured in list of  best new poems of the month

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/9/2019 12:58:00 PM
Hello Debjani Mitra, a dandelion will always grow making browish grass looking bright. Some people use the leaves to make wine, also the leaves put into salads, have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 4/24/2019 7:00:00 AM
Nature at its best...a flower that only uses the wind to be sown. Your entry is really lovely Debjani. Congratulations on your win. I love how you created your poem. : )xxoo
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Date: 4/12/2019 3:22:00 PM
I love your take on the dandelion theme, Debjani. You describe so well the cycle of life. Regards // paul
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Date: 4/6/2019 11:46:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. I can't wait for summer. Have a great day.
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