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Dandelion Dream

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Dandelion Dream

-Dandelion Dream-

I stand close with a fistful of flowers
My tiny bouquet made of dandelion dreams 
They fade with one gush from the wind
I stand close with a fistful of flowers
Holding on tight to jagged leaves 
Sprinkles of sand fall over my needs
I stand close with a fistful of flowers
My tiny bouquet made of dandelion dreams 

~SKAT~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 10/5/2016 1:08:00 PM
Add me to the long list of admirers of this poem, Skat A. I love flowers, so the poem really struck a good vibe w/me. Now I know what a triolet poem looks like. Ty for sharing such a positive show-and-tell poem w/us. I can already see how talented a poetess you are. Much love and respect.
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Date: 8/24/2016 2:15:00 AM
Nicely done, l love it
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Date: 8/19/2016 12:59:00 AM
I really like this. Thank you for sharing this and all your other pieces. W
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Date: 6/23/2016 9:18:00 AM
This is quite beautiful and sad.
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Date: 1/24/2016 4:33:00 PM
Just love seeing this one again. Reminds me of my poem Dandelion Wishes.
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Date: 1/20/2016 5:40:00 AM
I was about to write a poem about Daffodils and then I saw your Dandelion Dream. Straight forward, beautiful, and clear. Love it!
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Date: 1/2/2016 9:32:00 AM
Reminded me of childhood....nice.....
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Date: 8/12/2015 9:56:00 AM
Skat, I love this poem A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, O the pain
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Date: 8/7/2015 7:56:00 PM
Delightful imagery and the photos made it real! Great job!
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Date: 8/7/2015 5:24:00 AM
Wow this is truly an amazing idea well laid out and deeply brought to the medium. I am so happy to be your first friend here and I will be so happy to know you more and discover more of your amazing work , hugs michael
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Date: 6/22/2015 11:59:00 AM
Well chose repetitive couplet makes this tsriolet work, Brava
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Date: 5/18/2015 8:00:00 PM
Always wanted to know about writing different text in poetry. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 5/12/2015 6:58:00 PM
Pretty flowers come alive in this fistful of a dreamy triolet, smooth and fascinating with the images it presents.
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Date: 4/29/2015 6:05:00 PM
Skat, very pretty Triolet, I used to pick dandelions for my mom, they were always totally wilted, but she still put them in a glass on the window ledge, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Quick Exit
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Date: 4/27/2015 3:15:00 PM
Great Triolet! Great imagery and flow. Nice job
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Date: 3/29/2015 11:32:00 PM
Hello, Thank you for the warm welcome into Poetry Soup. Your poem takes me back to my childhood but also keeps me in the present.
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Date: 3/29/2015 11:31:00 PM
Hello, Thank you for the warm welcome into Poetry Soup. Your poem takes me back to my childhood but also keeps me in the present.
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Date: 3/8/2015 7:15:00 AM
Hello my very lovely sis and friend, Skat! I don't remember if I've already read this before but I'm so honored and so grateful that I dropped by to read it this evening. This is an exquisitely beautiful poem my dearest friend! I love it sooo much! A fave. I've missed reading from you. Thank you so much for sharing! May I've also this chance to say thank you for your congratulatory comments on my poems. So Sorry for my very late expression of gratitude once again 'cz of my hectic sched. Hope you're doin well always. Pls. give my sweet regards to my dearest friend & poet sis, Linda. TYTYSM & a Blessed weekend to you! Many hugs! lovem4evr,Leonora
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:30:00 AM
This piece is so beautiful in terms of imagery, flow, and depth of meaning. This is my kind of poetry that I enjoy reading and I hope to write like that one day! All the best, my dear poet! Pandita
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Date: 6/19/2014 2:35:00 AM
nicely done SKAT ((( happy summer )))
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Date: 6/13/2014 6:08:00 PM
Beautiful imagery; I love the dandelion--except when it overtakes my lawn. Thanks for your recent visit to my poem "Books."
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Date: 6/12/2014 11:31:00 AM
Many dreams vanish into thin air...with one puff of wind; but others survive and flourish! Lovely write where imagery is a reality. // paul
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Date: 5/11/2014 10:21:00 PM
A short write but so powerful. A mark of a finer sense of expression. Bravo and especially loved the line "Holding on tight to jagged leaves"
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Date: 5/10/2014 2:19:00 AM
My newest poetry soup "FRIEND", this write is simply beautiful...a fistful of flowers....still going on in my head! Lovely :)
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Date: 5/1/2014 9:16:00 PM
SKAT What a descriptive, imaginative and creative write. Full of feeling and so dreamlike. Thank you for the nice comment on my Colors poem.
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