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Dandelion Draw

Tim or Tom or Joe or Bill Pick a dandelion and begin the drill He loves me, He loves me not He loves me, He loves me not Sitting on the hill alone Humming these words in monotone Tim or Tom or Joe or Bill Which one for my love to fill He loves me ,He loves me not He loves me,He loves me not Two more petals left to go Tim, Tom ,no its Joe! Pick another try again Change the names oh yes I can He loves me, he loves me not He loves me , he loves me not.

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Daniel Turner

Date: 10/16/2017 3:23:00 PM

If Dan had been one of the names, this would have been a better poem. lol The only thing about that is, it would have always ended in he loves me:) Sweet write, Kelli.

Kelli White
Date: 10/16/2017 3:53:00 PM

Hahaha. I was not even thinking of anyone. Lol. You can use Dan as many times as you wish. Lol.

Mick Talbot

Date: 10/16/2017 9:53:00 AM

Simply sweet! Do it walking, Down the street, Surprising who You might meet. A perfect stranger, Maybe a treat?

Kelli White
Date: 10/16/2017 11:09:00 AM

I love your interpretation. A whole new role. Hahaha. Military drill song. Trick or treat lollipop or other sweet. Thank you