Kelli White Poet Free verse

Dandelion Draw

Tim or Tom or Joe or Bill
Pick a dandelion and begin the drill

He loves me, He loves me not
He loves me, He loves me not

Sitting on the hill alone 
Humming these words in monotone

Tim or Tom or Joe or Bill
Which one for my love to fill

He loves me ,He loves me not
He loves me,He loves me not

Two more petals left to go
Tim, Tom ,no its Joe!

Pick another try again
Change the names oh yes I can

He loves me, he loves me not
He loves me , he loves me not.

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Daniel Turner October 16, 2017 at 3:23 PM If Dan had been one of the names, this would have been a better poem. lol The only thing about that is, it would have always ended in he loves me:) Sweet write, Kelli. Kelli White October 16, 2017 at 3:53 PM Hahaha. I was not even thinking of anyone. Lol. You can use Dan as many times as you wish. Lol.

Mick Talbot October 16, 2017 at 9:53 AM Simply sweet! Do it walking, Down the street, Surprising who You might meet. A perfect stranger, Maybe a treat? Kelli White October 16, 2017 at 11:09 AM I love your interpretation. A whole new role. Hahaha. Military drill song. Trick or treat lollipop or other sweet. Thank you