Dandelion

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star-like seeds disperse adrift in the air so swift left alone ~ the moon 11 May 2021 For "All Yours ( May 11) Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Brian Strand 1st Place Poem of the Week May 16, 2021

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Valsa George

Date: 2/24/2022 7:50:00 PM

Great Haiku ! Moon looks more radiant when it stays alone without stars or clouds

Jan Allison

Date: 5/23/2021 12:56:00 AM

such a stunning haiku many congrats on POTW, they are amazing plants i just wish they wouldn't seed themselves in my lawn though!:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 5/21/2021 11:48:00 PM

Such a beautiful haiku. I can picture this scene. Congrats on POTW!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 5/19/2021 1:40:00 PM

I see them now...floating on the wind star-like and magical....beautiful Congratulations on POTW! Susan :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/19/2021 7:48:00 AM

vibrant aloneness! one of the best haikus I’ve read! Congrats on POTW, JCB!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/17/2021 12:46:00 AM

The lowly Dandelion is so much more than a weed. It had medicinal properties and makes a fine tea as well. I enjoyed your fantastic imagery in this fabulous haiku JCB. Congratulations on your wonderful POTW honor! Blessings, Connie xxoo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/16/2021 4:21:00 PM

Some say a *Dandelion* is a weed. To me, it is a flower. Wishes floating through the breeze. (star-like seeds) Yes, I completely agree. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations JCB, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy

Jcb Brul
Date: 5/16/2021 6:31:00 PM

I agree with you Nicole, it is a flower emanating so much loveliness. I myself witnessed this late spring how star-like seeds disperse and float in the air. I have taken a video but I can only upload a picture.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/16/2021 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem of the week win. What a creative dandelion write in only three lines. Have a blessed day/week with your win....................

Jcb Brul
Date: 5/16/2021 6:31:00 PM

Thank you Paula.