Dancing-Acrostic

Dance ballerina dance
All the stations played it
Nat King Cole was the star
Couples smooched to the music
In every club and bar
Naughty things happened after dusk,
Girls wed, babies all premature.

Penned September 23 rd. 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horne Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 3:43 PM
enjoyed this witty write - thanks, loved the contest : )
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 1:10 AM
Hi Jack thanks for your comment ..Seren
Sivey Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:02 PM
I like that song too my friend! I used to frequent the clubs when I was young, that was fun then! I don't do that anymore but I have memories of that time period, some great ones...although I have to admit, I really stink at dancing! But I did it anyway (and made a fool of myself, ha ha) this is a fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 1:11 AM
I love the sound if N.K.C.....Seren
Ellison Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:10 AM
Awww loved it Seren... brought back such sweet memories! Also loved the touch of humour! Big big hugs, Jack xoxox
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 1:12 AM
Thank you Jack ...Seren
Sathasivam Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:58 AM
Excellent. Lovely write. enjoyed. Tfs
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 1:12 AM
Hi Ravi ...thanks for stopping by ...Seren
Mehta Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:15 AM
Nice acrostic looks a winning poem, Seren
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 1:13 AM
Thank you Ram, we will see ..Seren
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