Dancing With the Fae

Nightly dances with the Fae,
Oh how I long to get away,
From daylights suffocating grasp,
I dream the way to moonlights path.
There they are, such beauty is a treat,
The wicked Fae sweep me from my feet,
To forget about my long day,
And at long last forever dance among the Fae.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mac Donald Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 2:48 PM
The Fae sounds cool, but they probably aren't the most reliable creatures, Jay! Maybe finding small things that happen in your day...a smile, a kind word, then building up your own store of goodnesses will help you to be more conscious of what surrounds you? I'm sure it would increase tenfold each day! Keep well, be happy!!! love, Mikki
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August 14, 2012 at 2:40 PM
A fun write, Jay! After a long and cumbersome day, it's great to find even the tiniest good parts and send up a thanks! As days go by you will be more conscious of all the good stuff. Smiles are always a good start, they can be shared! Best wishes, Mikki
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 1:20 PM
Thank you for visit and comment my poem....I have a poem JUST PERFECT for YOU:"Sweet dance" >>> enjoy it Jay. oxox love Anne-Lise :) :)
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 12:26 PM
This is just beautiful written Jay ! - Thank you for sharing your poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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