Jslambert Mister Roboto Poet Rondeau

----------------------------Dancing With Eve----

We danced through words
black silk of her hair calmed my nerves
we danced through words
lovers enticed through songs of birds
one magic Eve a man deserves
lost in the taste of all her curves
we danced through words


~JSLambert Esquire 
 
*personally written for Nette Onclaud's
       WEAVE A RONDELET Contest!

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Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2011 at 11:55 PM well, JS. I have to go off Soup soon, so I can't find a poem of yours I have not read. Coming back to this one. I REALLY like this one. Thanks for your comments! Luv, Andrea

John Aaron Green October 15, 2011 at 3:59 PM very nice,,,great meaning from man to woman...

Nancy Jones September 25, 2011 at 6:53 PM ahhh, them magic eves.. Beautiful, JSL esq. Congrats and happy day~N

Carol Sunshine Brown September 24, 2011 at 5:51 PM Congratulations on your win with your Weave A Rondelet poem Jasper. Love, Carol

Jack Ross Jr. September 23, 2011 at 2:36 PM Wonderful write JS love the danced through word enticed by songs of birds...with love....old Jack Jack Ross Jr. September 23, 2011 at 2:37 PM oh by the way good luck on contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 23, 2011 at 7:31 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, JSLambart

Margaret Foster September 23, 2011 at 5:05 AM Well done JS. glad the magic Eve was found.... cheers Marg

Chiquitachiamaka Baity September 23, 2011 at 3:42 AM whoa..i am loving this one...really nice JS... Congrats my friend....ALL SMILES...chiquita

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2011 at 9:54 PM so then, you must be high on LIFE, like me (except when I am grumbling about my back. haha). I too adore that little birdhouse song you mentioned! And hey, a big congrats on your win for those splendid poem. what did I tell you!

Black Eyed Susan September 22, 2011 at 8:48 PM very sensuous poem. i love the line "one magic Eve a man deserves" and the whole idea of dancing through words. congratulations on your win!

John Freeman September 22, 2011 at 7:28 PM JS, A pleasure to see this top win for you. Congratulations on a worthy top poem, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 22, 2011 at 5:33 PM Congrats JS on a super fantastic first place win luv..

Dan Kearley September 22, 2011 at 4:52 PM Very Nicely done! I must say...Lots of fans I see.Thats what happens with well written word though. :-)

Connie Marcum Wong September 22, 2011 at 8:03 AM A sensuous masterpiece! Not a doubt how well this one will fair in the contest.

Sara Kendrick September 22, 2011 at 6:33 AM Greatly woven..Enjoyed your work this morn..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I enjoyed writing that one about the Organdy fabric..Sara

Nette Onclaud September 22, 2011 at 1:37 AM another souo mail... IMPT!!! :)

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2011 at 1:27 AM joey, Nette is absolutely going to LOVE yours here. I am pretty sure!!! You seem very funny over here today. I've been reading your comments all over the place. Are you high? hahaha. Luv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud September 22, 2011 at 1:27 AM soup mail..:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 21, 2011 at 6:56 PM lovely lines JS.. please accept my apology for calling u Jasper ..however there is another poet on PS who also uses JS in his name.. forgive the "Sweetheart"... much success in Nette's contest with this rare beauty luv..

Kim Merryman September 21, 2011 at 6:16 PM Nicely done! Kim