Dancing Waves

 Seagulls play along the shore
 Swooping in and out of the tide
 Golden sun shimmers on waves as they dance some more
 Now and then seagulls take a ride
 Whispers of sunset amid the roar
 Soon, golden hues will be spied
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George Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 8:52 AM
The sea and the setting sun always draw the attention of poets. The sea cannot be conceived of without the image of seagulls . Well composed, dear friend.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 2:11 AM
I love writing poems about the sea. Yours is great.
Crandall Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 6:54 PM
You paint a pretty picture. I can see it. I'm only 3 miles from the beach and this makes me realize and I need to go there and watch the sunset. I'm gonna put it on my list. Target date: Summer 2025!
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 11:20 PM
This is so lovely and rhythmic, Joseph
May Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 10:22 AM
Thank you Andrea
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 1:18 PM
- A lovely colorful dance as the sun sets, Joseph :) - Have a nice Easter weekend :) - hugs
May Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 4:55 PM
Thank you Anne, Enjoy our Easter
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 7:46 AM
I'm sitting looking out at the sea as i read this minus the sun as its dull and grey , perfect imagery in your fab rhyme Joseph:-) hugs jan xx
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