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Dancing Waves

Seagulls play along the shore Swooping in and out of the tide Golden sun shimmers on waves as they dance some more Now and then seagulls take a ride Whispers of sunset amid the roar Soon, golden hues will be spied

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Date: 6/9/2025 8:52:00 AM
The sea and the setting sun always draw the attention of poets. The sea cannot be conceived of without the image of seagulls . Well composed, dear friend.
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Date: 5/22/2025 2:11:00 AM
I love writing poems about the sea. Yours is great.
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Date: 5/12/2025 6:54:00 PM
You paint a pretty picture. I can see it. I'm only 3 miles from the beach and this makes me realize and I need to go there and watch the sunset. I'm gonna put it on my list. Target date: Summer 2025!
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Date: 4/17/2025 11:20:00 PM
This is so lovely and rhythmic, Joseph
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Joseph May
Date: 4/18/2025 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 4/16/2025 1:18:00 PM
- A lovely colorful dance as the sun sets, Joseph :) - Have a nice Easter weekend :) - hugs
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Joseph May
Date: 4/17/2025 4:55:00 PM
Thank you Anne, Enjoy our Easter
Date: 4/16/2025 7:46:00 AM
I'm sitting looking out at the sea as i read this minus the sun as its dull and grey , perfect imagery in your fab rhyme Joseph:-) hugs jan xx
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