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Dancing the Big Slide

Snowy mountain peaks, dance for thunderous applause. Avalanche rumba!

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Matthew Anish

Date: 11/9/2009 6:43:00 AM

Nice personification! The "dance" of nature can bring delight! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/6/2009 6:09:00 PM

HI MARTY COOL DANCE ! i LIKE IT THANKS FOR THE COMMENT. ALSO WHAT INSTRUMENT DO YOU PLAY?

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/4/2009 9:08:00 AM

hot poem list!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/3/2009 12:20:00 AM

i love this Avalanche--Mighty--Charma

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/1/2009 8:51:00 AM

Nice personification here! Dancing mountains - sounds Biblical! Peace & Blessins Matthew Anish

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/31/2009 7:31:00 PM

good poem, avalanche rumba-great line!!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/31/2009 5:55:00 PM

Dear Martin, awesome Haiku I live on a mountain and saw an Avalanche "Thunderous" is a perfect sound effect Thank-YOU for YOUR'Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG

Milton Toran

Date: 10/31/2009 5:02:00 PM

Excellent tribute to nature. I love haiku. All the syllables are true and accurate. Perfect 5-7-5 count. Milt

Sue Mason

Date: 10/31/2009 3:05:00 PM

GREAT Haiku here! You've taken a very scary dangerous phenomenon and made it LOL wonderful ... smile ...

Moonbee Canady

Date: 10/31/2009 2:37:00 PM

Oh, I Love The Slide (Water Slides That Is - Smile)... Great Write, pulled out my memory ... that is sometimes avalanched LOL... MoonBee

Date: 10/31/2009 1:49:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and personification for a creative view. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2009 12:02:00 PM

Very well thought out Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/31/2009 8:20:00 AM

Great imagery in this perfect Haiku, Marty! Spectacular scene! I love the title, too! Love, Robin

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/31/2009 6:49:00 AM

Oh Marty u have captured much in a few lines.. so descriptive and vibrant.. thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry .. much appreciated for the "new kid on the Soup".. Linda-Marie...