Dancing the Big Slide

Snowy mountain peaks,
dance for thunderous applause.
Avalanche rumba!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Anish Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 6:43 AM
Nice personification! The "dance" of nature can bring delight! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Dufresne Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 6:09 PM
HI MARTY COOL DANCE ! i LIKE IT THANKS FOR THE COMMENT. ALSO WHAT INSTRUMENT DO YOU PLAY?
Culverhouse Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 9:08 AM
hot poem list!!
Chircop Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 12:20 AM
i love this Avalanche--Mighty--Charma
Anish Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 8:51 AM
Nice personification here! Dancing mountains - sounds Biblical! Peace & Blessins Matthew Anish
Culverhouse Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 7:31 PM
good poem, avalanche rumba-great line!!
Esquire Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 5:55 PM
Dear Martin, awesome Haiku I live on a mountain and saw an Avalanche "Thunderous" is a perfect sound effect Thank-YOU for YOUR'Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG
Toran Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 5:02 PM
Excellent tribute to nature. I love haiku. All the syllables are true and accurate. Perfect 5-7-5 count. Milt
Mason Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 3:05 PM
GREAT Haiku here! You've taken a very scary dangerous phenomenon and made it LOL wonderful ... smile ...
Canady Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 2:37 PM
Oh, I Love The Slide (Water Slides That Is - Smile)... Great Write, pulled out my memory ... that is sometimes avalanched LOL... MoonBee
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October 31, 2009 at 1:49 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification for a creative view. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 12:02 PM
Very well thought out Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
Gass Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 8:20 AM
Great imagery in this perfect Haiku, Marty! Spectacular scene! I love the title, too! Love, Robin
Sweetheart Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 6:49 AM
Oh Marty u have captured much in a few lines.. so descriptive and vibrant.. thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry .. much appreciated for the "new kid on the Soup".. Linda-Marie...
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