Smita Kulkarni Poet Personification

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Dancing Stream

Nestled in a mountain town, 
Enclosed in downs of clouds,
Flows a dancing stream
Spiraling, bouncing,
Swaying along with the mountain breeze 

Winding through trees, rocks and bushes,
Supporting vibrant foliage,
She voyages through forest
Jabbering, hopping
Swaying along with the mountain breeze

Dazzling in the sun 
Shining thousands of sparkling diamonds
She springs over rocks and pebbles
Bubbling, splashing,
Swaying along with the mountain breeze

Attending to the whispers of the sky
And wheezing winds
She travels catching pearls of raindrops
Clinking, twirling
Swaying along with the mountain breeze

Entertaining and providing to peoples
And friends from the wild 
She drifts ceaselessly with vitality
Spiraling, bouncing,
Swaying along with the mountain breeze

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Beryl Edmonds December 1, 2023 at 6:17 PM Lovely poetry and the title ‘Dancing Stream’ is supreme… Belle

Sotto Poet March 6, 2023 at 6:05 PM A profound poem with a lovely cadence throughout. The imagery that was produced was beautiful. Thanks for your visit and comment on my page.

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2021 at 3:23 PM Gorgeous imagery, Smita. Very well done

Anitha Jayasankar August 28, 2021 at 8:20 AM A rich poem that flows beautifully.. Loved the imagery created... God bless... Hugs... ~ Ani Smita Kulkarni September 5, 2021 at 12:21 PM Thank you Ani for your sweet comment!

Heidi Sands August 19, 2021 at 1:10 PM Oh I love this! It reminds me of a river nearby, where my dog also likes to go. It was fun to read and written with nice flow. A Fave for me :) Smita Kulkarni September 5, 2021 at 12:22 PM So sweet of you Heidi to stop by! Thanks for your feedback!

Vijay Pandit August 17, 2021 at 6:57 AM This is one of your best, Smita. Excellent flow and imagery. Loved the rhythm of your poem. The repeating line enhances its beauty. Smita Kulkarni September 5, 2021 at 12:22 PM Thanks Vijay for your feedback! I appreciate it!

Angela Crabtree August 2, 2021 at 4:26 PM A wonderful poem Smita. You have captured the stream perfectly in your words. Hope you have a wonderful week. :) Smita Kulkarni August 4, 2021 at 10:25 AM Thank you Angela!!

Joanna Daniel July 30, 2021 at 10:25 PM This is so enchanting, Smita, you have captured the beauty of a stream as it is:) Smita Kulkarni August 4, 2021 at 10:24 AM Thank you Jo for stopping by!

Sotto Poet July 29, 2021 at 5:10 PM Smita, you did a fantastic job on this project. A wonderful poem with a lot of meaning throughout and good imagery. It was really amazing. Smita Kulkarni August 4, 2021 at 10:24 AM I appreciate your feedback Lasaad! Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar July 28, 2021 at 11:21 PM Well done, Smita. A lovely poem, full of imagery. I loved it. Smita Kulkarni July 29, 2021 at 11:26 AM So sweet of you Victor to stop by and giving me your feedback!! I appreciate it!! Thank you! -Smita