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Nestled in a mountain town, 
Enclosed in downs of clouds,
Flows a dancing stream
Spiraling, bouncing,
Swaying along with the mountain breeze 

Winding through trees, rocks and bushes,
Supporting vibrant foliage,
She voyages through forest
Jabbering, hopping
Swaying along with the mountain breeze

Dazzling in the sun 
Shining thousands of sparkling diamonds
She springs over rocks and pebbles
Bubbling, splashing,
Swaying along with the mountain breeze

Attending to the whispers of the sky
And wheezing winds
She travels catching pearls of raindrops
Clinking, twirling
Swaying along with the mountain breeze

Entertaining and providing to peoples
And friends from the wild 
She drifts ceaselessly with vitality
Spiraling, bouncing,
Swaying along with the mountain breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/1/2023 6:17:00 PM
Lovely poetry and the title ‘Dancing Stream’ is supreme… Belle
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Date: 3/6/2023 6:05:00 PM
A profound poem with a lovely cadence throughout. The imagery that was produced was beautiful. Thanks for your visit and comment on my page.
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Date: 9/8/2021 3:23:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery, Smita. Very well done
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Date: 8/28/2021 8:20:00 AM
A rich poem that flows beautifully.. Loved the imagery created... God bless... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 9/5/2021 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Ani for your sweet comment!
Date: 8/19/2021 1:10:00 PM
Oh I love this! It reminds me of a river nearby, where my dog also likes to go. It was fun to read and written with nice flow. A Fave for me :)
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 9/5/2021 12:22:00 PM
So sweet of you Heidi to stop by! Thanks for your feedback!
Date: 8/17/2021 6:57:00 AM
This is one of your best, Smita. Excellent flow and imagery. Loved the rhythm of your poem. The repeating line enhances its beauty.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 9/5/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thanks Vijay for your feedback! I appreciate it!
Date: 8/2/2021 4:26:00 PM
A wonderful poem Smita. You have captured the stream perfectly in your words. Hope you have a wonderful week. :)
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 8/4/2021 10:25:00 AM
Thank you Angela!!
Date: 7/30/2021 10:25:00 PM
This is so enchanting, Smita, you have captured the beauty of a stream as it is:)
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 8/4/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Jo for stopping by!
Date: 7/29/2021 5:10:00 PM
Smita, you did a fantastic job on this project. A wonderful poem with a lot of meaning throughout and good imagery. It was really amazing.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 8/4/2021 10:24:00 AM
I appreciate your feedback Lasaad! Thank you!
Date: 7/28/2021 11:21:00 PM
Well done, Smita. A lovely poem, full of imagery. I loved it.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/29/2021 11:26:00 AM
So sweet of you Victor to stop by and giving me your feedback!! I appreciate it!! Thank you! -Smita

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