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Dancing Stars

In a milky way supernova stars throw sparks of gold and silver. Dance troop casts a cosmic spell; stage lights up by their ardour. Date : 07/09/2017

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Date: 7/27/2017 1:28:00 PM
Amazing imagery that just lights up the night sky with mystery and romance! Love it! Best regards. Pandita
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/28/2017 10:36:00 AM
Thank you, Pandita.
Date: 7/11/2017 7:54:00 PM
I really like this one too. YOu posted two super nova poems!!! By the way, line two (throw instead of throws)
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Date: 7/11/2017 10:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Date: 7/11/2017 7:54:00 PM
I meant of the two I just saw today. They were both wonderful.
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Date: 7/10/2017 9:30:00 AM
Creative combining of celestial stars w/the theatrical stars, Afzal. Wonderfully expressed tanka. Well done, my friend. Love and peace always.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/10/2017 10:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Freddie.
Date: 7/10/2017 12:04:00 AM
I love the images that this wonderful Tanka of yours conjures up. Stars...My favourite topic Afzal Brilliant...Maria
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/10/2017 2:01:00 AM
Thank you very much, Maria.
Date: 7/9/2017 8:10:00 PM
When I was a kid it seemed there were billions of stars in the sky; anymore I'm lucky if I see 10...how can anyone deny pollution, global warming and environmental damage with open eyes? Love the poem.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/9/2017 11:15:00 PM
Every word of your is so true and I actually wrote a poem about environmental crisis recently by the name 'Horrors of Extinction.' Thanks for the kind visit and comments.
Date: 7/9/2017 7:15:00 PM
Those dancing stars sure do have a way of keeping us mesmerized and we cannot help but gaze up at them... I really enjoyed the imagery in this lovely poem, Afzal. Very well written!
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/9/2017 11:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kelly.

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