Afzal Nusker Poet Tanka

Dancing Stars

In a milky way
            supernova stars throw sparks
                     of gold and silver.
  Dance troop casts a cosmic spell;
                   stage lights up by their ardour.


Date : 07/09/2017

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Pandita Sietesantos July 27, 2017 at 1:28 PM Amazing imagery that just lights up the night sky with mystery and romance! Love it! Best regards. Pandita Afzal Nusker July 28, 2017 at 10:36 AM Thank you, Pandita.

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2017 at 7:54 PM I meant of the two I just saw today. They were both wonderful.

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2017 at 7:54 PM I really like this one too. YOu posted two super nova poems!!! By the way, line two (throw instead of throws) Afzal Nusker July 11, 2017 at 10:23 PM Thank you so much, Andrea.

Freddie Robinson Jr. July 10, 2017 at 9:30 AM Creative combining of celestial stars w/the theatrical stars, Afzal. Wonderfully expressed tanka. Well done, my friend. Love and peace always. Afzal Nusker July 10, 2017 at 10:40 PM Thank you very much, Freddie.

Maria Williams July 10, 2017 at 12:04 AM I love the images that this wonderful Tanka of yours conjures up. Stars...My favourite topic Afzal Brilliant...Maria Afzal Nusker July 10, 2017 at 2:01 AM Thank you very much, Maria.

M. L. Kiser July 9, 2017 at 8:10 PM When I was a kid it seemed there were billions of stars in the sky; anymore I'm lucky if I see 10...how can anyone deny pollution, global warming and environmental damage with open eyes? Love the poem. Afzal Nusker July 9, 2017 at 11:15 PM Every word of your is so true and I actually wrote a poem about environmental crisis recently by the name 'Horrors of Extinction.' Thanks for the kind visit and comments.

Kelly Deschler July 9, 2017 at 7:15 PM Those dancing stars sure do have a way of keeping us mesmerized and we cannot help but gaze up at them... I really enjoyed the imagery in this lovely poem, Afzal. Very well written! Afzal Nusker July 9, 2017 at 11:11 PM Thank you so much, Kelly.