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Dancing Silhouettes

Dancing Silhouettes

Our silhouettes are dancing nigh
the water, moon and eclipsed sky

Crystal Clear Poetry Contest

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May 1, 2019

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Panagiota Romios

May 18, 2019 at 12:38 PM

Just lovely! Panagitota

Jan Allison

May 13, 2019 at 4:53 PM

such beautiful imagery and rhyme Ralph, shame about the missing syllable its a winner in my eyes:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

May 9, 2019 at 8:30 AM

So pretty! Good luck in the contest Ralph.

Ralph Sergi

May 9, 2019 at 10:56 AM

Hi RICHARD: I left one syllable out. (oops)

Ralph Sergi

May 9, 2019 at 7:46 AM

Hi Connie: Thank you but I left one syllable out.

Connie Marcum Wong

May 9, 2019 at 3:10 AM

I really loved this one Ralph! You could make this 17 syllables really easy. Like: the water, and moon with eclipsed sky. I hate it that this beauty didn't make the list. xxoo

Susan Ashley

May 8, 2019 at 7:39 PM

I adore the dreamy and romantic spirit of your poem, Ralph. So much vibrancy in such a short piece, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Ralph Sergi

May 18, 2019 at 9:08 PM

carpe diem done over

Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2019 at 3:36 PM

this is so clever, Ralph. I love it! Is it not on the list? I see it is 16 syllables and not 17. Maybe for that reason? So beautiful this little poem.

Ralph Sergi

May 5, 2019 at 9:10 PM

Hi Andrea: If it was 17 syllables, then I lost.

Alexis Y.

May 4, 2019 at 5:55 PM

Wow! Ralph, You painted a lovely picture with words! The photo and the poem compliments each other well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Ralph Sergi

May 5, 2019 at 8:01 AM

Sorry, I meant Alexis!

Ralph Sergi

May 5, 2019 at 8:00 AM

ThanK you, Alexus!