Dancing Set Her Spirit Free

She was a shy girl
Few words spoken from her
When out in the world.
She was unsure of who she was
Living in her shell
Not unlike that of a prison cell.


Refrain

But dancing set her spirit free
Gone was her fear
Whether in class or on stage
Gone was her cage
The beauty inside unfurled
A smart, happy, controlled girl emerged.



Afraid to say something wrong
Afraid to do something wrong
She did not wish to upset anyone
She was not so smart
So her mother said many times
Often cross with her she didn’t know why.


Refrain

But dancing set her spirit free
Gone was her fear
Whether in class or on stage
Gone was her cage
The beauty inside unfurled
A smart, happy, controlled girl emerged.


When she was back in the world
Where shattered had been her trust
The shy, unsure girl returned
She wanted to be liked
She knew there was much to give inside
Few people knew the real person inside.



Refrain

But dancing set her spirit free
Gone was her fear
Whether in class or on stage
Gone was her cage
The beauty inside her unfurled
A smart, happy, controlled girl emerged.


She had a smile that could light up a room
She was  kind and had compassion for others
She knew how to listen to others
Why didn’t she feel free
To express her mind
Why couldn’t she shine?


Refrain

But dancing set her spirit free
Gone was her fear
Whether in class or on stage
Gone was her cage
The beauty inside her unfurled
A smart, happy, controlled girl emerged.


One day she left her home
And made her own
She made many friends
And her work was commended
Others listened to her words
She found she made a difference.


Refrain

Dancing had set her spirit free
Gone was her fear
Whether in class or on stage
Gone was her cage
The beauty inside her unfurled
A smart, happy, controlled girl emerged.

By CarolineCécile
© April 6, 2006.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/24/2010 5:23:00 PM
What a wonderful story - Great write Caroline!~Tirzah~
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Date: 8/24/2010 1:58:00 AM
Smile ~ "Soo Very Tender And Beautiful This Story 'Dear Gifted And Precious Caroline Delacroix; Just As The Poetess Whom Penned Its Splendors I Believe!!!" ~ "You" captured endearing here dear lady, "I Love 'Your Poetry" ~ This is a fave and, I want to "Thank You" for "Your" kind com this morning dear and, "Beautiful Poem" ~ "My Love And Warmth to You And Your Loves Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Dear Caroline, Pirouetting Upon The Stages of Beautiful Love;" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:25:00 PM
I probably started to adore Freedom at 3 years old...a shy little girl, mom took her to ballet classes. That shell was gone whenever I was on stage...I was free to express myself..and learned to be ME. Beautiful poem, dear Caroline. Are these lyrics for a song? Love, Iolanda
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:13:00 AM
wonderful write my new friend. always Michael
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:05:00 AM
lovely poetry, I very much enjoyed it
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:40:00 AM
Thanks for pointing out the spelling errors in my poem Quo Vadis, Caroline. The feelings that I expressed is all over since two decades. I am sorry if I sound blunt.
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Date: 8/22/2010 8:29:00 PM
Wonderful and creative free verse on a dancing girl - A nice character drawing, Caroline
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