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Dancing On Treetops

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Admiring foliage in autumn array, I lay in repose, gazing up at the view… I could not believe who was there on display! Was I seeing clearly? How could it be true? Up there on the treetops, she twirled in delight as leaves whirled below her, immersed in the fun. A blue stage had emptied as one belle in sight bedazzled the crowd like the rays of the sun! Adorned in her pointe shoes with hair flowing wild, she charmed inner child, this longing for free. Pure grace in white tutu drew widest of smiles… I’ll always remember when she danced for me.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/24/2019 12:49:00 PM

This is wondrous, HT. Love it... Looking at Caren Krutsinger's 'November Twinkle Fairy' contest, I wonder if this sterling write could be tweaked just a hair to fit that contest... Just a thought; I don't want to or normally like to mess with 'perfection!' Warm wishes, Gershon

Hello There
Date: 10/24/2019 3:29:00 PM

Gershon, I wondered the same thing about the contest...we'll see ;) Your comments have really made my day ~ thank you very much for stopping by :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/21/2019 8:34:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Hello There. I enjoyed the image, too... they were perfect together. Love the writing. Love, Gina

Hello There
Date: 10/22/2019 1:22:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gina ~ hugs <3

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/21/2019 7:13:00 PM

this is beautiful...the photo and the words just blend perfectly together....amazing write my friend :) hugs

Hello There
Date: 10/22/2019 1:21:00 AM

Thank you so very much, my sweet friend :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/21/2019 5:09:00 PM

Sure looks like a dancing tutu..whirling in the photo and in your splendid poem, HT.

Hello There
Date: 10/21/2019 5:33:00 PM

Thanks, Vijay ~ it was a pretty amazing sight, my friend

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/21/2019 4:54:00 PM

This is beautiful HT! Amazing sight and poem :)

Hello There
Date: 10/21/2019 5:03:00 PM

I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Heidi! Looks really neat zoomed in, too, but I didn't want to post too many pics ;) Thank you :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/21/2019 4:51:00 PM

That was enchanting HT. What a wonderful interpretation of the image in the clouds. This one sung to me as I read it. Your rhythm and rhyme is superb in this. I loved everything about it. Beautifully done my friend.

Hello There
Date: 10/28/2019 2:39:00 PM

Hmm...I'm not sure what happened to my response here. But I am so appreciative of this wonderful comment, my friend :) I am absolutely thrilled you enjoyed this so much!! <3