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Dancing On Treetops

Admiring foliage in autumn array,
I lay in repose, gazing up at the view…
I could not believe who was there on display!
Was I seeing clearly? How could it be true?

Up there on the treetops, she twirled in delight
as leaves whirled below her, immersed in the fun.
A blue stage had emptied as one belle in sight 
bedazzled the crowd like the rays of the sun!

Adorned in her pointe shoes with hair flowing wild,
she charmed inner child, this longing for free.
Pure grace in white tutu drew widest of smiles…
I’ll always remember when she danced for me.

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Gershon Wolf October 24, 2019 at 12:49 PM This is wondrous, HT. Love it... Looking at Caren Krutsinger's 'November Twinkle Fairy' contest, I wonder if this sterling write could be tweaked just a hair to fit that contest... Just a thought; I don't want to or normally like to mess with 'perfection!' Warm wishes, Gershon Hello There October 24, 2019 at 3:29 PM Gershon, I wondered the same thing about the contest...we'll see ;) Your comments have really made my day ~ thank you very much for stopping by :)

Regina Mcintosh October 21, 2019 at 8:34 PM Beautiful poem, Hello There. I enjoyed the image, too... they were perfect together. Love the writing. Love, Gina Hello There October 22, 2019 at 1:22 AM Thank you so much, Gina ~ hugs <3

Sandra Adams October 21, 2019 at 7:13 PM this is beautiful...the photo and the words just blend perfectly together....amazing write my friend :) hugs Hello There October 22, 2019 at 1:21 AM Thank you so very much, my sweet friend :) hugs

Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 5:09 PM Sure looks like a dancing tutu..whirling in the photo and in your splendid poem, HT. Hello There October 21, 2019 at 5:33 PM Thanks, Vijay ~ it was a pretty amazing sight, my friend

Heidi Sands October 21, 2019 at 4:54 PM This is beautiful HT! Amazing sight and poem :) Hello There October 21, 2019 at 5:03 PM I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Heidi! Looks really neat zoomed in, too, but I didn't want to post too many pics ;) Thank you :)

Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 4:51 PM That was enchanting HT. What a wonderful interpretation of the image in the clouds. This one sung to me as I read it. Your rhythm and rhyme is superb in this. I loved everything about it. Beautifully done my friend. Hello There October 28, 2019 at 2:39 PM Hmm...I'm not sure what happened to my response here. But I am so appreciative of this wonderful comment, my friend :) I am absolutely thrilled you enjoyed this so much!! <3