Dancing On Swan Song

A flower blooms beauty in the prime of spring
Dances as a lone ballerina in the amorous air
Enters many enthralled hearts that surely sing
For her to dance to the tune with charming flair.

To the surrealistic world of her she takes them
Their minds floating mesmerized in ecstatic air
Adulation plucks the flower from the drying stem
Youth wilts with passing years, she doesn’t care.

Time always plays with her life the cruel game
She falls from heights of admiration and grace
Gnawing apathy, an infliction she couldn’t tame
arc light fades as obscurity suffuses to embrace.

Flower of her gleaming youth flashes on her face
She dances to the flitting rhythm of her swan song
Blaze of the last dance makes the stage a fireplace
She burns the affliction, proving people wrong.

Written : September 24, 2017
May 7, 2020
Contest : Brian's Choice 5, Any Form, Any Theme
Sponsor : Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dutta Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 7:16 AM
Congrats Subimal to win o your nice piece
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:34 AM
Thank you, Anisha for appreciating.
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:39 AM
Congrats Subimal!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:33 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
Gupta Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:30 AM
Congratulations on your nice success with the beautifully composed poem ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:33 AM
Thank you so much for appreciating.
Ashley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations Subimal on your win with this excellent poem! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:33 AM
Thank you, Susan.
La France Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 12:57 PM
Subimal, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:32 AM
Thank yoiu, BW.
Lindley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Congrats on your fine win my friend. I love the intensity of this fine piece. And how you blended in the cruelties of life, sorrows of lost love and lost youth into this excellent piece!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Thank you, Robert for your understanding and appreciation.
One Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:20 AM
A beautiful poem that shows the passion of the painting.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Thank you, Silent One, for understanding my take on the painting and for your appreciation.
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