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Dancing On Swan Song

A flower blooms beauty in the prime of spring Dances as a lone ballerina in the amorous air Enters many enthralled hearts that surely sing For her to dance to the tune with charming flair. To the surrealistic world of her she takes them Their minds floating mesmerized in ecstatic air Adulation plucks the flower from the drying stem Youth wilts with passing years, she doesn’t care. Time always plays with her life the cruel game She falls from heights of admiration and grace Gnawing apathy, an infliction she couldn’t tame arc light fades as obscurity suffuses to embrace. Flower of her gleaming youth flashes on her face She dances to the flitting rhythm of her swan song Blaze of the last dance makes the stage a fireplace She burns the affliction, proving people wrong. Written : September 24, 2017 May 7, 2020 Contest : Brian's Choice 5, Any Form, Any Theme Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 9/27/2017 7:16:00 AM
Congrats Subimal to win o your nice piece
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/30/2017 12:34:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha for appreciating.
Date: 9/27/2017 4:39:00 AM
Congrats Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/30/2017 12:33:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
Date: 9/27/2017 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your nice success with the beautifully composed poem ...
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/30/2017 12:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for appreciating.
Date: 9/26/2017 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal on your win with this excellent poem! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/30/2017 12:33:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 9/26/2017 12:57:00 PM
Subimal, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/30/2017 12:32:00 AM
Thank yoiu, BW.
Date: 9/26/2017 8:22:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win my friend. I love the intensity of this fine piece. And how you blended in the cruelties of life, sorrows of lost love and lost youth into this excellent piece!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/26/2017 10:45:00 PM
Thank you, Robert for your understanding and appreciation.
Date: 9/26/2017 7:20:00 AM
A beautiful poem that shows the passion of the painting.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/26/2017 10:45:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One, for understanding my take on the painting and for your appreciation.

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