Dancing On Sunbeams

sweet song of dawn drifting on the winds of summer butterflies dancing on sunbeams all day 5/27/17

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Heidi Sands

Date: 6/1/2017 1:03:00 PM

This is lovely! Beautiful :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/30/2017 10:37:00 AM

Great imagery in a few words, Joseph:) you have nailed the perfect scenario :)

Maria Williams

Date: 5/29/2017 11:47:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in such a few but excellent descriptive words Joseph.....Maria

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/29/2017 12:39:00 AM

This is a great image to hold on to :) Nice, Joseph!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/28/2017 3:35:00 PM

Loved this gem, I really liked the line "butterflies dancing on sunbeams" It makes one picture the moment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2017 1:28:00 PM

- A beautiful picture ... dancing in the summer dress, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2017 8:27:00 PM

oh wow, Joseph. It could be a part two of mine, going into the beautiful days of summer. I adore it!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/27/2017 12:26:00 PM

A beautiful picture!