Dancing On Sunbeams

sweet song of dawn drifting on the winds of summer butterflies dancing on sunbeams all day
5/27/17
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Sands Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 1:03 PM
This is lovely! Beautiful :)
Daniel Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 10:37 AM
Great imagery in a few words, Joseph:) you have nailed the perfect scenario :)
Williams Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 11:47 PM
Beautiful imagery in such a few but excellent descriptive words Joseph.....Maria
Teagan Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 12:39 AM
This is a great image to hold on to :) Nice, Joseph!
Vaso Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Loved this gem, I really liked the line "butterflies dancing on sunbeams" It makes one picture the moment!
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 1:28 PM
- A beautiful picture ... dancing in the summer dress, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 8:27 PM
oh wow, Joseph. It could be a part two of mine, going into the beautiful days of summer. I adore it!
Wanter Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 12:26 PM
A beautiful picture!
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