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Not a more beautiful sight to see then two dancing on ice holding each others hand while bowing to the crowd Starting their harmonic swings with such grace and harmony Then twirling and spinning with loop jumps through the air Catching her with only inches to spare excitement to much to bear The sake blades shaving the ice as they create a lutz loop The edge jump salchow is continued then blended into Axel While the wind from their speed blows their tassels though the air With the score of nine all across the board winners they become Figure Skating is their life a love for ice with beauty beyond compare The strength and agility involved in preforming such moves while skating Is underrated by watching the ease they display putting on this ice show

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Date: 2/20/2019 11:26:00 AM
I watch and marvel, in absolute awe. Your poem is delicate like they are.
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Bobby May
Date: 2/20/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thank You very much Caren!
Date: 2/20/2019 9:42:00 AM
Isn't it just beautiful! And they do make it look so easy... This is a beautiful tribute to the art of figure skating. Amazeballs!
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Bobby May
Date: 2/20/2019 9:48:00 AM
LOL P.S. thank you