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Freedom! Sensuously she spreads her wings, Floating in glorious glens Now at one with nature 16th February 2015 Jan Allison Syllables checked with how many syllables Contest In Praise of Kimo – Nette Onclaud ~awarded 6th place~ Visual 1

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/14/2018 8:20:00 PM

An awesome and well crafted write . Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2018 4:07:00 AM

For some reason the picture has disappeared:-( hugs jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/9/2018 1:16:00 PM

A charming Kimo poem. Glorious glens ... a lovely expression. Real pretty poem. Love and joy always.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2018 4:07:00 AM

Thanks Freddie:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet

Date: 4/7/2017 11:38:00 PM

So simple and yet so beautiful...I want to be her!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2017 3:59:00 AM

Thanks for visiting one of my older poems Carole - I loved the visual Nette found for us:-) hugs jan xx

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/19/2015 11:00:00 AM

I felt the one with nature at once when I saw the picture... just couldn't make it work for me... but here you have done it beautifully !!! Wonderful interpretation of the visual. Love it !! Congrats !!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2015 3:52:00 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Debra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Janet Eaton

Date: 3/18/2015 6:38:00 AM

A beautiful write Jan, Congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 3/18/2015 6:44:00 AM

Thanks Janet:-) hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward

Date: 3/17/2015 12:58:00 PM

A pretty poem! Hugs, Julia, xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2015 1:01:00 PM

Thanks Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Grace Mutindi

Date: 3/16/2015 4:52:00 AM

I must confess Jan that your 'Dancing on air' encouraged me to try out this kimo. Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2015 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Grace - this is the first time I have tried this form:-) Hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/13/2015 4:33:00 PM

ahh nicely done! :) Grats on your placement

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 6:37:00 PM

Thanks Cas:-) Hugs jan xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/13/2015 2:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 6:37:00 PM

Thanks Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/13/2015 12:36:00 PM

Beautiful kimo, and congrats on your win as well, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 6:36:00 PM

Thanks so much Laura:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/13/2015 10:56:00 AM

Stopping back to congratulate you on your placement in this contest, Jan. Well done! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 11:32:00 AM

Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/13/2015 6:43:00 AM

thee and me chose the same visual (an intriguing one, I thought; it shouts 'freedom') and also placed together! I really like this kimo and it was maybe deserving of a higher placement; I like the alliteration of "glorious glens" - congrats on your win! hugs, charlotte

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 7:39:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Charlotte - need to pop by and see where we placed:-) Hugs jan xx

Lei Strauss

Date: 2/24/2015 7:38:00 AM

Clear picture of freedom. I so love it

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2015 8:55:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Lei:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 2/20/2015 6:32:00 AM

Nice take on the image Jan. Good luck in the contest, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 8:27:00 AM

Thanks James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/19/2015 12:02:00 PM

Lovely poem read from lovely friend. Beautifully expressed the ditto picture. Goog luck in the contest. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2015 12:22:00 PM

Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

C.M. Davidson-Pickett

Date: 2/18/2015 5:30:00 PM

Lovely poem with stunning imagery...good luck in the contest! Hugs...7...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/18/2015 6:12:00 PM

Thanks so much CM:-) Hugs Jan xxx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/17/2015 11:05:00 AM

A very freeing Kimo...beautifully done.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 11:13:00 AM

Thanks so much ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

Date: 2/16/2015 9:47:00 PM

Her love brings freedom on the wind -- can you smell it, I inhaled deeply and now like nature, I am loved deeply. Your words painted my imagination . . . much love and light dear friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 1:22:00 AM

Thanks so much David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/16/2015 6:14:00 PM

Wonderful poetic imagery that interprets the visual so well, Jan! My best wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 1:21:00 AM

Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 2/16/2015 5:07:00 PM

Jan, I drew a blank on that visual but you took it and gave it wings. Good luck in the contest, this is a winner in my book.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 5:14:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment John:-) Thought I would give it a try - never written this form before:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 2/16/2015 4:10:00 PM

Free..one with nature..lovely Jan....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 4:22:00 PM

Thanks Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

William Gray

Date: 2/16/2015 2:20:00 PM

Beautiful verse Jan!.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 2:22:00 PM

Thanks so much William:-) Hugs Jan xx

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/16/2015 2:09:00 PM

Jan, This is so beautiful. Good luck in the contest. How do you master every style?? A 7 from me. Wishing you the best. Janet

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 2:22:00 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Janet - i just give it my best shot and hope for the best - have never tried this form before - there are some contests I won't do - I know my limitations lol :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2015 1:21:00 PM

ops ... I would give you a 7 :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 1:24:00 PM

Thanks so much I often forget to give the rating too:-) Hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2015 1:20:00 PM

- A beautiful picture, Jan - Congratulations on your first kimo !!!! - (Long time since I wrote for a contest) - I wish you best of luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/16/2015 1:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx