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Freedom! Sensuously she spreads her wings, Floating in glorious glens Now at one with nature 16th February 2015 Jan Allison Syllables checked with how many syllables Contest In Praise of Kimo – Nette Onclaud ~awarded 6th place~ Visual 1

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Date: 7/14/2018 8:20:00 PM
An awesome and well crafted write . Hugs Eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/15/2018 4:07:00 AM
For some reason the picture has disappeared:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/9/2018 1:16:00 PM
A charming Kimo poem. Glorious glens ... a lovely expression. Real pretty poem. Love and joy always.
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:07:00 AM
Thanks Freddie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/7/2017 11:38:00 PM
So simple and yet so beautiful...I want to be her!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/8/2017 3:59:00 AM
Thanks for visiting one of my older poems Carole - I loved the visual Nette found for us:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/19/2015 11:00:00 AM
I felt the one with nature at once when I saw the picture... just couldn't make it work for me... but here you have done it beautifully !!! Wonderful interpretation of the visual. Love it !! Congrats !!
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Date: 3/19/2015 3:52:00 PM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Debra:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/18/2015 6:38:00 AM
A beautiful write Jan, Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:44:00 AM
Thanks Janet:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/17/2015 12:58:00 PM
A pretty poem! Hugs, Julia, xx
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Date: 3/17/2015 1:01:00 PM
Thanks Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 4:52:00 AM
I must confess Jan that your 'Dancing on air' encouraged me to try out this kimo. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Grace - this is the first time I have tried this form:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/15/2015 4:26:00 PM
Jan, lovely imagery in your sweet winning write!
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Date: 3/15/2015 5:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Dave:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2015 4:33:00 PM
ahh nicely done! :) Grats on your placement
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Date: 3/13/2015 6:37:00 PM
Thanks Cas:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/13/2015 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love
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Date: 3/13/2015 6:37:00 PM
Thanks Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2015 12:36:00 PM
Beautiful kimo, and congrats on your win as well, Jan!
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Date: 3/13/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Laura:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2015 10:56:00 AM
Stopping back to congratulate you on your placement in this contest, Jan. Well done! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/13/2015 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2015 6:43:00 AM
thee and me chose the same visual (an intriguing one, I thought; it shouts 'freedom') and also placed together! I really like this kimo and it was maybe deserving of a higher placement; I like the alliteration of "glorious glens" - congrats on your win! hugs, charlotte
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/13/2015 7:39:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Charlotte - need to pop by and see where we placed:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/24/2015 7:38:00 AM
Clear picture of freedom. I so love it
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Date: 2/24/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely comment Lei:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/20/2015 6:32:00 AM
Nice take on the image Jan. Good luck in the contest, hugs, James xx
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Date: 2/20/2015 8:27:00 AM
Thanks James:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 12:02:00 PM
Lovely poem read from lovely friend. Beautifully expressed the ditto picture. Goog luck in the contest. Loved always,bl
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Date: 2/19/2015 12:22:00 PM
Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/18/2015 5:30:00 PM
Lovely poem with stunning imagery...good luck in the contest! Hugs...7...
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Date: 2/18/2015 6:12:00 PM
Thanks so much CM:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 2/17/2015 11:05:00 AM
A very freeing Kimo...beautifully done.
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Date: 2/17/2015 11:13:00 AM
Thanks so much ML:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 9:47:00 PM
Her love brings freedom on the wind -- can you smell it, I inhaled deeply and now like nature, I am loved deeply. Your words painted my imagination . . . much love and light dear friend.
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Date: 2/17/2015 1:22:00 AM
Thanks so much David:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 6:14:00 PM
Wonderful poetic imagery that interprets the visual so well, Jan! My best wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/17/2015 1:21:00 AM
Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 5:07:00 PM
Jan, I drew a blank on that visual but you took it and gave it wings. Good luck in the contest, this is a winner in my book.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2015 5:14:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment John:-) Thought I would give it a try - never written this form before:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 4:10:00 PM
Free..one with nature..lovely Jan....hugs Tim
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Date: 2/16/2015 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 2:20:00 PM
Beautiful verse Jan!.
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Date: 2/16/2015 2:22:00 PM
Thanks so much William:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 2:09:00 PM
Jan, This is so beautiful. Good luck in the contest. How do you master every style?? A 7 from me. Wishing you the best. Janet
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2015 2:22:00 PM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Janet - i just give it my best shot and hope for the best - have never tried this form before - there are some contests I won't do - I know my limitations lol :-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 2/16/2015 1:21:00 PM
ops ... I would give you a 7 :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2015 1:24:00 PM
Thanks so much I often forget to give the rating too:-) Hugs jan xx
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