Jan Allison Poet Kimo

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Dancing On Air

Freedom! Sensuously she spreads her wings, 
Floating in glorious glens
Now at one with nature

16th February 2015
Jan Allison
Syllables checked with how many syllables
Contest In Praise of Kimo – Nette Onclaud
~awarded 6th place~
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Eve Roper July 14, 2018 at 8:20 PM An awesome and well crafted write . Hugs Eve Jan Allison July 15, 2018 at 4:07 AM For some reason the picture has disappeared:-( hugs jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 9, 2018 at 1:16 PM A charming Kimo poem. Glorious glens ... a lovely expression. Real pretty poem. Love and joy always. Jan Allison July 15, 2018 at 4:07 AM Thanks Freddie:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet April 7, 2017 at 11:38 PM So simple and yet so beautiful...I want to be her! Jan Allison April 8, 2017 at 3:59 AM Thanks for visiting one of my older poems Carole - I loved the visual Nette found for us:-) hugs jan xx

Debra Squyres March 19, 2015 at 11:00 AM I felt the one with nature at once when I saw the picture... just couldn't make it work for me... but here you have done it beautifully !!! Wonderful interpretation of the visual. Love it !! Congrats !! Jan Allison March 19, 2015 at 3:52 PM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Debra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Janet Eaton March 18, 2015 at 6:38 AM A beautiful write Jan, Congrats on your win Jan Allison March 18, 2015 at 6:44 AM Thanks Janet:-) hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward March 17, 2015 at 12:58 PM A pretty poem! Hugs, Julia, xx Jan Allison March 17, 2015 at 1:01 PM Thanks Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Grace Mutindi March 16, 2015 at 4:52 AM I must confess Jan that your 'Dancing on air' encouraged me to try out this kimo. Congrats on your win! Jan Allison March 16, 2015 at 8:40 AM Thanks Grace - this is the first time I have tried this form:-) Hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance March 13, 2015 at 4:33 PM ahh nicely done! :) Grats on your placement Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 6:37 PM Thanks Cas:-) Hugs jan xx

Debbie Guzzi March 13, 2015 at 2:07 PM Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 6:37 PM Thanks Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser March 13, 2015 at 12:36 PM Beautiful kimo, and congrats on your win as well, Jan! Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 6:36 PM Thanks so much Laura:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight March 13, 2015 at 10:56 AM Stopping back to congratulate you on your placement in this contest, Jan. Well done! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 11:32 AM Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot March 13, 2015 at 6:43 AM thee and me chose the same visual (an intriguing one, I thought; it shouts 'freedom') and also placed together! I really like this kimo and it was maybe deserving of a higher placement; I like the alliteration of "glorious glens" - congrats on your win! hugs, charlotte Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 7:39 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Charlotte - need to pop by and see where we placed:-) Hugs jan xx

Lei Strauss February 24, 2015 at 7:38 AM Clear picture of freedom. I so love it Jan Allison February 24, 2015 at 8:55 AM Thank you so much for the lovely comment Lei:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser February 20, 2015 at 6:32 AM Nice take on the image Jan. Good luck in the contest, hugs, James xx Jan Allison February 20, 2015 at 8:27 AM Thanks James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath February 19, 2015 at 12:02 PM Lovely poem read from lovely friend. Beautifully expressed the ditto picture. Goog luck in the contest. Loved always,bl Jan Allison February 19, 2015 at 12:22 PM Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

C.M. Davidson-Pickett February 18, 2015 at 5:30 PM Lovely poem with stunning imagery...good luck in the contest! Hugs...7... Jan Allison February 18, 2015 at 6:12 PM Thanks so much CM:-) Hugs Jan xxx

M. L. Kiser February 17, 2015 at 11:05 AM A very freeing Kimo...beautifully done. Jan Allison February 17, 2015 at 11:13 AM Thanks so much ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade February 16, 2015 at 9:47 PM Her love brings freedom on the wind -- can you smell it, I inhaled deeply and now like nature, I am loved deeply. Your words painted my imagination . . . much love and light dear friend. Jan Allison February 17, 2015 at 1:22 AM Thanks so much David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight February 16, 2015 at 6:14 PM Wonderful poetic imagery that interprets the visual so well, Jan! My best wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison February 17, 2015 at 1:21 AM Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

John Lawless February 16, 2015 at 5:07 PM Jan, I drew a blank on that visual but you took it and gave it wings. Good luck in the contest, this is a winner in my book. Jan Allison February 16, 2015 at 5:14 PM Thanks for your lovely comment John:-) Thought I would give it a try - never written this form before:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 4:10 PM Free..one with nature..lovely Jan....hugs Tim Jan Allison February 16, 2015 at 4:22 PM Thanks Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

William Gray February 16, 2015 at 2:20 PM Beautiful verse Jan!. Jan Allison February 16, 2015 at 2:22 PM Thanks so much William:-) Hugs Jan xx

Janet Eaton February 16, 2015 at 2:09 PM Jan, This is so beautiful. Good luck in the contest. How do you master every style?? A 7 from me. Wishing you the best. Janet Jan Allison February 16, 2015 at 2:22 PM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Janet - i just give it my best shot and hope for the best - have never tried this form before - there are some contests I won't do - I know my limitations lol :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen February 16, 2015 at 1:21 PM ops ... I would give you a 7 :) Jan Allison February 16, 2015 at 1:24 PM Thanks so much I often forget to give the rating too:-) Hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen February 16, 2015 at 1:20 PM - A beautiful picture, Jan - Congratulations on your first kimo !!!! - (Long time since I wrote for a contest) - I wish you best of luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison February 16, 2015 at 1:23 PM Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx

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