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Dancing On a Cloud

You got me feeling good Like I never knew I could I feel like dancing on a cloud Baby I can shout it real loud You tell me that you love me My heart is all aglow But if I strip down and let you see inside my soul All of things that's not whole If strip down and bare all Will you still love me, when I stand here baring it all? I asked that question years ago, You said, there's something you should know If you strip down and let me your soul All of the things that's broken and not whole I'll being standing by your side loving you unconditionally Then I'll strip down and let you see the real man that's in love with you 11-17-16 Alexis Y

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Date: 12/11/2016 1:18:00 PM
Love should be unconditional based on trust & honesty. Loved your Lyric.
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Date: 12/11/2016 1:24:00 PM
Hi Afzal, I totally agree. If love isn't based on honesty and trust, what do you really have? I'm glad you liked this lyrics. I appreciate the support: -) Alexis
Date: 11/24/2016 10:25:00 AM
The real man tha's in love with you...loved it.
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Date: 11/18/2016 11:46:00 AM
Marvelous poem, Alexis. The truth and the honesty is intoxicating. As Usher said: you make me wanna be the one to start a ... well, you know the rest. Bare it all w/grace, my dear. Ha ha ha. Love this poem though. Love and joy to you. RW
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Date: 11/17/2016 11:37:00 AM
A highly feel-good poem!
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:28:00 AM
Its beautiful when we can lay bare naked...naked to our soul..and be loved for who we are..Isnt it..Lovely.
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Date: 11/17/2016 8:44:00 AM
I feel like dancing naked now Alexis! :) One sure test of genuine love, is show them all your boo boos! If they don't run, you've got something authentic.
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Date: 11/17/2016 7:57:00 AM
When they see all of your faults and scars and they still love you, then that is true love. Beautifully written my sweet friend.
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