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DANCING ON A CLOUD

You got me feeling good 
Like I never knew I could
I feel like dancing on a cloud
Baby I can shout it  real loud

You tell me that you love me
My heart is all aglow

But if a I strip down and let
you see my soul
All of things that's not whole
If strip down and bare all

Will you still love me, when
I stand here baring it all? 

I asked that question years ago,
You said, there's something you
should know

If you strip down and let me 
your soul 
All of the things that's broken
and not whole

I'll being standing by your side
loving you unconditionally 

Then I'll strip down and let you
see the real man that's in love
with you 

11-17-16
Alexis Y

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Date: 12/11/2016 1:18:00 PM
Love should be unconditional based on trust & honesty. Loved your Lyric.
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Date: 12/11/2016 1:24:00 PM
Hi Afzal, I totally agree. If love isn't based on honesty and trust, what do you really have? I'm glad you liked this lyrics. I appreciate the support: -) Alexis
Date: 11/24/2016 10:25:00 AM
The real man tha's in love with you...loved it.
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Date: 11/18/2016 11:46:00 AM
Marvelous poem, Alexis. The truth and the honesty is intoxicating. As Usher said: you make me wanna be the one to start a ... well, you know the rest. Bare it all w/grace, my dear. Ha ha ha. Love this poem though. Love and joy to you. RW
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Date: 11/17/2016 11:37:00 AM
A highly feel-good poem!
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:28:00 AM
Its beautiful when we can lay bare naked...naked to our soul..and be loved for who we are..Isnt it..Lovely.
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Date: 11/17/2016 8:44:00 AM
I feel like dancing naked now Alexis! :) One sure test of genuine love, is show them all your boo boos! If they don't run, you've got something authentic.
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Date: 11/17/2016 7:57:00 AM
When they see all of your faults and scars and they still love you, then that is true love. Beautifully written my sweet friend.
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