Alexis Y. Poet Lyric

Dancing On a Cloud

You got me feeling good 
Like I never knew I could
I feel like dancing on a cloud
Baby I can shout it  real loud

You tell me that you love me
My heart is all aglow

But if I strip down and let
you see inside my soul
All of things that's not whole
If strip down and bare all

Will you still love me, when
I stand here baring it all? 

I asked that question years ago,
You said, there's something you
should know

If you strip down and let me 
your soul 
All of the things that's broken
and not whole

I'll being standing by your side
loving you unconditionally 

Then I'll strip down and let you
see the real man that's in love
with you 

11-17-16
Alexis Y

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Afzal Nusker December 11, 2016 at 1:18 PM Love should be unconditional based on trust & honesty. Loved your Lyric. Alexis Y. December 11, 2016 at 1:24 PM Hi Afzal, I totally agree. If love isn't based on honesty and trust, what do you really have? I'm glad you liked this lyrics. I appreciate the support: -) Alexis

Gerald Kithinji November 24, 2016 at 10:25 AM The real man tha's in love with you...loved it.

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 18, 2016 at 11:46 AM Marvelous poem, Alexis. The truth and the honesty is intoxicating. As Usher said: you make me wanna be the one to start a ... well, you know the rest. Bare it all w/grace, my dear. Ha ha ha. Love this poem though. Love and joy to you. RW

Lyva Marty November 17, 2016 at 11:37 AM A highly feel-good poem!

Charmaine Chircop November 17, 2016 at 10:28 AM Its beautiful when we can lay bare naked...naked to our soul..and be loved for who we are..Isnt it..Lovely.

Paloma P November 17, 2016 at 8:44 AM I feel like dancing naked now Alexis! :) One sure test of genuine love, is show them all your boo boos! If they don't run, you've got something authentic.

Chris Green November 17, 2016 at 7:57 AM When they see all of your faults and scars and they still love you, then that is true love. Beautifully written my sweet friend.