Carol Mitra Poet Rhyme

Dancing Ocean and Seas

The rippling blue, with specks of white
Dancing in the morning light
The shadows now buried deep
Those ocean creatures woken from sleep
Do they exchange secret tales
Of hills that stand like sentinels?
Against the fiercest storms and gales
Guarding the waters a stately wall  
And where do they go?
These waves that be
Smiling from here to eternity
Are they tidings from another sea?
Do they merge in warm embrace
In pure and blissful ecstasy?

23.8.2021
Contest: Oceans and Seas (FIRST PLACE )
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Frances Schiavina September 2, 2021 at 7:38 AM What a beautiful poem Carol and congratulations on well deserved top win. Carol Mitra September 2, 2021 at 9:04 PM Thanks dear Frances....much appreciated :)

Constance La France August 27, 2021 at 6:08 AM Carol, beautiful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Oceans and Seas ~ love and serenity _Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 26, 2021 at 12:14 PM Congratulations, Carol, on your top win. A beautiful poem picturing waves from seas and oceans! They are magical - aren’t they? you have an original poetic style - love it! Hugs ~ Mala Carol Mitra August 26, 2021 at 7:37 PM Thanks dear Mala....I am glad you liked it :)

Paula Goldsmith August 26, 2021 at 8:25 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful sea write. The blue waves are smiling. Have a blessed day.................. Carol Mitra August 26, 2021 at 7:36 PM Thanks dear Paula....same to you...much love :)

William Kelii Kekaula August 26, 2021 at 12:18 AM Magical, Carol, with an air of natural charm that your wand weaves its well-chosen words into their proper places. A wonderful 1st Place effort earned my friend, with my compliments, Aloha! Carol Mitra August 26, 2021 at 1:17 AM Thanks dear William....much love and so glad you liked it :)

Regina Mcintosh August 25, 2021 at 12:34 PM I love this. A beautiful rhyme. God bless you and Congrats on a top win. Love, Gina Carol Mitra August 25, 2021 at 10:41 PM Thanks dear Gina....much love :)

Brian Sambourne August 25, 2021 at 12:09 PM Beautifully written, Carol. Your verses are exceptionally original in content. The incorporation of rhetorical questions strengthens the piece as well. Congratulations! Brian Carol Mitra August 25, 2021 at 10:40 PM Thanks dear Brian....much love :)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 23, 2021 at 2:55 AM - I live by the sea ... and see it dancing every day ... a beautiful sight ... best wishes in the contest, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Carol Mitra August 23, 2021 at 4:25 AM Thanks dear Anne-Lise :)

Mohamed Omar August 23, 2021 at 1:51 AM A blissful ecstatic poem. Carol Mitra August 23, 2021 at 4:25 AM Thank you Mohamed :)