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Dancing Ocean and Seas

The rippling blue, with specks of white Dancing in the morning light The shadows now buried deep Those ocean creatures woken from sleep Do they exchange secret tales Of hills that stand like sentinels? Against the fiercest storms and gales Guarding the waters a stately wall And where do they go? These waves that be Smiling from here to eternity Are they tidings from another sea? Do they merge in warm embrace In pure and blissful ecstasy? 23.8.2021 Contest: Oceans and Seas (FIRST PLACE ) Sponsor: Constance La France

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 9/2/2021 7:38:00 AM

What a beautiful poem Carol and congratulations on well deserved top win.

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/2/2021 9:04:00 PM

Thanks dear Frances....much appreciated :)

Constance La France

Date: 8/27/2021 6:08:00 AM

Carol, beautiful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Oceans and Seas ~ love and serenity _Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/26/2021 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations, Carol, on your top win. A beautiful poem picturing waves from seas and oceans! They are magical - aren’t they? you have an original poetic style - love it! Hugs ~ Mala

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2021 7:37:00 PM

Thanks dear Mala....I am glad you liked it :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/26/2021 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful sea write. The blue waves are smiling. Have a blessed day..................

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2021 7:36:00 PM

Thanks dear Paula....same to you...much love :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/26/2021 12:18:00 AM

Magical, Carol, with an air of natural charm that your wand weaves its well-chosen words into their proper places. A wonderful 1st Place effort earned my friend, with my compliments, Aloha!

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2021 1:17:00 AM

Thanks dear William....much love and so glad you liked it :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/25/2021 12:34:00 PM

I love this. A beautiful rhyme. God bless you and Congrats on a top win. Love, Gina

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/25/2021 10:41:00 PM

Thanks dear Gina....much love :)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/25/2021 12:09:00 PM

Beautifully written, Carol. Your verses are exceptionally original in content. The incorporation of rhetorical questions strengthens the piece as well. Congratulations! Brian

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/25/2021 10:40:00 PM

Thanks dear Brian....much love :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2021 2:55:00 AM

- I live by the sea ... and see it dancing every day ... a beautiful sight ... best wishes in the contest, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/23/2021 4:25:00 AM

Thanks dear Anne-Lise :)

Mohamed Omar

Date: 8/23/2021 1:51:00 AM

A blissful ecstatic poem.

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/23/2021 4:25:00 AM

Thank you Mohamed :)