Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Written - 29th October 2024

Jill Nursery Rhyme Contest - Sponsored by: Charles Messina

 

Dancing Jill

 Jill had so wished to join a ballet class
Her mom said that she could, when she was asked
Mom bought Jill ballet shoes and leotard
And Jill joined the class looking real smart.

Jill’s heart soared as she danced across the floor
Never had felt so elated before
She learnt to pirouette on tippy toes
Twirling and whirling, swift as the wind blows.

Mom was most delighted with Jill’s success
She knew that ballet for her was the best
Jill had been a timid shy girl before
Now she'd found confidence on the dance floor.

Dad was excited for his daughter too
He loved watching all the moves she could do
Jill dancing to music moved him to tears
He knew his daughter would dance through the years.

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Paula Goldsmith November 18, 2024 at 12:31 PM Congratulations on your win.  I enjoyed reading your lovely write. What a Great Ending you have here... Have a fun day writing away............... Beryl Edmonds November 18, 2024 at 2:33 PM Thank you Paula, I’m pleased you enjoyed the read. Enjoy your day writing away too… Beryl

Charles Messina November 18, 2024 at 2:10 AM Enjoyable write, Beryl. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie Beryl Edmonds November 18, 2024 at 2:31 PM Thank you Charles, it was a pleasure to enter your contest… Beryl

Panagiota Romios November 5, 2024 at 12:13 AM So well written, Beryl~ i anm glad my parebts let me start daning in first grade. My Dad was so proud of me. Mom spent a fortune on dance outfits, nothing was ready made. We went to the seamstress and they chose the outfits..my toe shoes were dyed to match my outfit, your poem is so real to me, I have to FAV it! Pangie Beryl Edmonds November 18, 2024 at 2:30 PM I danced when I was young, so did my sister, and like you had costumes and tap and ballet shoes, and danced on stage. Having been taken ill with a septic hip at twelve years old put paid to all of that. Thanks for your comments and the fave… Beryl

Michael Tor October 31, 2024 at 11:17 PM Beryl this is heartfelt in reading. You really captured a families support for their daughter-precious. Thank you for sharing truly enjoyed reading... Beryl Edmonds November 18, 2024 at 2:23 PM Thank you Michael, so pleased you enjoyed the read… Beryl

Janice Canerdy October 31, 2024 at 5:24 AM Beryl, your lovely poem is an inspiring reminder that dreams do come true. Janice Beryl Edmonds November 18, 2024 at 2:21 PM Thank you Janice… Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos October 30, 2024 at 1:17 AM Your rhyming in this so cute a tale about dancing Jill, is spot on my friend, and the poem is touching. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Beryl Edmonds October 30, 2024 at 1:52 AM Thank you dear Jennifer, I went to a dance class in my young days, till I went down with a septic hip and that ended my dreams of dancing on stage. Did that once only and it was wonderful. Blessings and hugs in return… Beryl

Karen Jones October 29, 2024 at 4:14 PM A sweet story within your flawless rhyme Beryl! Best wishes in the contest! Beryl Edmonds October 29, 2024 at 7:39 PM Thank you so much Karen, I appreciate every word you said… Beryl

John Read October 29, 2024 at 10:57 AM Lovely nursery rhyme sister Beryl, good luck in the contest. Beryl Edmonds October 29, 2024 at 12:27 PM Thank you brother John, I love writing for children, I hope they like this one… Sis Beryl