Kiran Bantawa Poet Rhyme

Dancing In the Starry Night

 Moonbeams fall upon us
Our face so jovial and bright,
Others beholding with hush
We’re Dancing in the starry night.

Gazing us thousands we don’t care
Sapphire embedded gown so bright,
So gorgeous you in unkempt hair
We’re Dancing in the starry night.

Moon smiles, stars rising few
Meadow lit by fireflies’ light,
Moon’s tears fall and turns to dew
We’re Dancing in the starry night.

For those who have died
You missed our dancing sight,
And for those who have survived
Come and dance in the starry night.

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Suzanne Delaney November 30, 2013 at 12:05 AM Hi Kiran: .....sapphire embedded gowns and moon smiles...I love the surprising language you have used in this Congratulations. SuZ Kiran Bantawa December 2, 2013 at 6:08 PM thank you for liking !!

Charmane Bellen November 27, 2013 at 12:55 AM Congrats!!wanna dance too..:) Kiran Bantawa November 27, 2013 at 1:32 AM let's go and dance . thanks!

Kelly Deschler November 26, 2013 at 7:05 PM I love the beautiful imagery in this poem! Nice flow and great rhyming! Really good work, Kiran! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much! Kiran Bantawa November 27, 2013 at 1:33 AM you are welcome and thank you.

Dan Kearley November 26, 2013 at 12:51 PM Alright! This makes me want to dance. Nice write! Thank you for stopping by. Kiran Bantawa November 27, 2013 at 1:33 AM for you. thanks!

Joseph May November 26, 2013 at 9:49 AM lovely write Kiran...congrats on your win Kiran Bantawa November 27, 2013 at 1:33 AM ok thanks for liking my poem.

Poet Destroyer A November 25, 2013 at 11:10 PM Kiran, Congratulations :-) for your nice win.... Thank you for considering my contest. Good Night ~ Linda ~ Kiran Bantawa November 26, 2013 at 6:45 AM thank you very much.

Kelly Deschler November 12, 2013 at 6:34 PM This poem is beautifully written, Kiran! The imagery is so relaxing and dreamy. I really enjoyed it! Wonderful work!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much! Kiran Bantawa November 16, 2013 at 7:41 AM thanks for liking.

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2013 at 1:02 AM this is so beautiful. With those repeating lines, are you sure this is not maybe a kyrielle form of poetry? Kiran Bantawa November 12, 2013 at 7:08 AM thanks,

Sara Kendrick November 8, 2013 at 10:54 AM Ahh!! I really like this one.. It has great rhythm, flow, and rhyme with the repeat line a ear catcher..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Kiran Bantawa November 8, 2013 at 4:54 PM thank u very much for liking