Dancing In the Rain

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                       A black cloud descends….                                 ,  ,     ,
                       Each flower grows hopeful!                                                     ,,
                       In jubilation, katydids, laughingly, make noisy ovations!        ,  ,  ,
                       Party-planner, Queen Rosie, STOPS to 
                       unleash verses,with ’xcited Yiddish zeal !
                                    …………………………………………………………….                     ,    ,
D   Daisy Mae, and Lily Gay, bathe in refreshing rains                       ,,
A   Anointed too, are tiny baby buds, with every little drop         ,,   ,,,
N   Narcissus squeals with laughter, and sings a sweet refrain      
C   Crickets dance with plaid berets, and do a Celtic hop! 
I    In the mud we’ll find two pigs, they splash, but then rain STOPS!
N   Nanny Goose, and Granny Goat, play banjos in the band
G   Gardenias, stash away umbrellas, they scrub from end to end
 
R   Rabbits hear the jubilee, and from a hole they pop
A   A squirrel or two, comes down the tree, where all the fuss began
I    In spite of fear, the little mouse, looks out to see what’s up
N   Nearby, the cat, just waves his hat, allows the mice some fun!
N   Dogs join in, STOP chasing cats, they splash, and play like kids
R   Rainbows fill the evening sky, where now the sun peeks in 
O   Overhead, the colors smile, in greens, and blues and reds
P   Pretty is the world tonight, refreshed, and clean, and good
S   Softly STOPS the pitter-pat upon on the evening’s hood
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Thirsty trees, and tender tulip tongues, tasted today’s tantalizing tonic 
Rain STOPS to retreat, to replenish, refresh, repair, and rest
Delighted dancers STOP, to discuss day’s divine delivery duties
Rainbows remind recovering revelers reasons to STOP and reflect, rejoice, recent rainy rewards
Slowly, in soft slippers, STOPping to shine, sun sets silently. 
Satisfactorily satiated, the scenery seems serene, sparkling and sleepy…..  

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Inspired by Debbie's Contest "Aye, Aye, and a Mistress"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Many congratulations, Carrie : )
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"contest. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 7:15 PM
Congrats Carrie on another fantastic win for a fabulous entry.. every phase is great luv..enjoy..
Wesley Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 5:33 PM
I loved it Carrie, should be in a child's book. So colorful and fun :)
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June 26, 2011 at 3:03 PM
A great job indeed!!!! Debbie will love this for sure... luv Michael
Johnson Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Oh you did a great job. All goes together so well. I see number 1 here. Love, Joyce
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